Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然，"keen on that"用法不准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并补充具体原因。

예시: My favorite colour is red because it always cheers me up when I feel sad. It reminds me of energy and passion.

제안: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多，如"feel me upset"不正确，且理由不够具体。建议用更准确的表达并给出具体原因。

예시: I dislike black because it often feels gloomy to me, and it reminds me of difficult times.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达朋友喜欢黄色的原因。

예시: Most of my friends like yellow because it represents success, like the yellow certificate they get for scholarships.

제안: 回答内容混乱，逻辑不清，且与问题不相关。建议围绕问题直接回答，避免无关信息。

예시: Green makes me uncomfortable in my room because it feels too bright and distracting for me.

× Red can always cheer me up when I feel blue.

✓ Red can always cheer me up when I am feeling blue.

这里的动词短语需要使用现在进行时态，表示当时的感受。'feel' 应改为 'am feeling'，因为描述的是正在发生的状态。

× that can always feel me upset when I'm in trouble.

✓ that can always make me feel upset when I'm in trouble.

动词 'feel' 不能直接带宾语 'me'，应使用 'make me feel' 结构来表达使某人感到某种情绪。

× Halo is the color which can supply their progress in study because our certification of the the scholarship is the is the yellow one.

✓ Halo is the color which can support their progress in study because our scholarship certificate is the yellow one.

'certification' 应改为复数形式或更合适的名词 'certificate'，且句子中重复了 'the' 和 'is the'，需要删除多余部分。

× Maybe green, although green is helpful to our eyes.

✓ Maybe green, although green is helpful for our eyes.

习惯用法中，'helpful' 后面通常接介词 'for' 而非 'to'，表示对某物有帮助。

× someone who stole my mobile was grey T-shirts.

✓ someone who stole my mobile was wearing a grey T-shirt.

'grey T-shirts' 是复数形式，但指的是一个人穿的衣服，应使用单数 'a grey T-shirt'，并补充动词 'wearing' 使句子完整。