Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and correct pronunciation errors such as 'soats' to 'suits'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more concise. For example, instead of repeating 'Moreover', use 'Additionally' or 'Also'.

예시: My favorite colour is black because it suits me well. Additionally, when I wear black clothes, I often receive compliments. I also prefer black accessories, like my sling bag, which match my style perfectly.

제안: Avoid filler words and try to explain your feelings more clearly with linking words. Use more precise vocabulary to describe your emotions and reasons.

예시: I dislike neon colours because they are very bright and sharp, which makes it hard for me to concentrate, especially in summer. Moreover, seeing such colours often makes me feel agitated and uncomfortable.

제안: Use consistent plural forms and avoid vague phrases like 'in today's era'. Also, use linking words to compare colours clearly and provide specific examples.

예시: My friends mostly prefer calm colours like white, pink, and soft brown. In contrast, bright colours such as dark red, yellow, and orange are less popular among them nowadays.

제안: Avoid repeating 'I think' and filler words. Clarify your ideas with linking words and be more specific about why certain colours make you uncomfortable. Also, correct grammar such as 'color' to 'colours' when plural.

예시: In my room, orange and yellow colours make me uncomfortable because I prefer soft, aesthetic colours like white, soft pink, purple, and lavender. Therefore, I avoid vibrant colours to create a calm atmosphere.

× I think it really soats on me.

✓ I think it really suits me.

The word 'soats' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'suits' which is the present tense form. 'Suits' means 'looks good on' or 'is appropriate for'. The error is due to incorrect verb usage.

× when I uh, put any black clothes on me, everyone gives me many compliments.

✓ when I uh, put on any black clothes, everyone gives me many compliments.

The phrase 'put any black clothes on me' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'put on any black clothes'. 'Put on' is a phrasal verb meaning to wear. The preposition 'on' should be part of the verb phrase, not followed by 'me'.

× So I think that colour is very good and sold for me.

✓ So I think that colour is very good and suitable for me.

The word 'sold' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'suitable', which means appropriate or fitting. This is an incorrect use of an adjective.

× Moreover, I like other accessories in black colour also, such as my bag sling.

✓ Moreover, I like other accessories in black colour also, such as my sling bag.

The phrase 'bag sling' is incorrect; the correct term is 'sling bag'. The order of the nouns is wrong, which is a common error in compound noun usage.

× I really dislike the neon colour because I think it is very, uh, sharp and I am not able to concentrate on neon colours in summer.

✓ I really dislike neon colours because I think they are very, uh, sharp and I am not able to concentrate on neon colours in summer.

The sentence mixes singular and plural forms inconsistently. 'Neon colour' should be plural 'neon colours' to match the rest of the sentence. Also, 'it is' should be 'they are' to agree with the plural subject.

× I really feel aggression and anger by seeing that colour.

✓ I really feel aggression and anger when I see that colour.

The phrase 'by seeing that colour' is awkward. The correct expression is 'when I see that colour' to indicate the cause of the feeling.

× Well, my friends like calm colors such as white, pinks and soft Browns.

✓ Well, my friends like calm colours such as white, pink and soft brown.

The plural forms 'pinks' and 'Browns' are incorrect here. Colour names used as adjectives or general references are usually singular. Also, 'Browns' should be lowercase 'brown'.

× I think that in today's era, everyone likes soft colours rather than choosing the bright colours such as dark red, yellow and oranges.

✓ I think that in today's era, everyone likes soft colours rather than bright colours such as dark red, yellow and orange.

The phrase 'rather than choosing the bright colours' is incorrect; 'rather than' should be followed by a noun phrase, not a verb. Also, 'oranges' should be singular 'orange' to match the list.

× Well, I think in my room, uh, orange and yellow color make me uncomfortable because I think that no material should be white or any aesthetic color like soft pink, soft purple, soft lavender.

✓ Well, I think in my room, uh, orange and yellow colours make me uncomfortable because I think that no material should be white or any aesthetic colour like soft pink, soft purple, soft lavender.

The singular 'color' should be plural 'colours' to agree with 'orange and yellow'. Also, 'color' should be spelled 'colour' to maintain consistency.

× I don't like vibrant colors in my room.

✓ I don't like vibrant colours in my room.

The word 'colors' should be spelled 'colours' to maintain consistency with British English spelling used elsewhere.