Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and make your sentences more concise and grammatically correct. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide more specific reasons for your preference.

예시: My favourite colour is green because it reminds me of nature and gives me a sense of peace and energy. For instance, seeing green trees makes me feel refreshed and calm.

제안: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Make sure your ideas are clear and well-structured. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically and provide specific examples.

예시: I don't dislike any colour because I believe each one has its own meaning. For example, red symbolises energy, while black represents elegance. Together, all colours create beautiful paintings.

제안: Try to avoid generalisations and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific reasons or examples about your friends' preferences.

예시: Most of my friends prefer pink and blue. For example, many girls like pink because it feels romantic and imaginative, while blue is popular for its calm and relaxing effect.

제안: Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to explain your feelings clearly and provide specific reasons why the colour makes you uncomfortable.

예시: Black makes me uncomfortable in my room because after working hard, I prefer a relaxing atmosphere. Moreover, black reminds me of negative feelings, which can make me feel depressed.

× Uh, when I see the green color, it gives me a peaceful and uh, will make me full of energy.

✓ Uh, when I see the green color, it gives me a peaceful feeling and makes me full of energy.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes verb forms and lacks a subject for 'will make'. The phrase 'will make me full of energy' should be connected properly with the previous clause. Using 'makes me full of energy' maintains subject-verb agreement and correct verb form.

× Uh, it's like a fresh air.

✓ Uh, it's like fresh air.

'Air' is an uncountable noun and does not require the definite article 'a' when used in this context. Saying 'like fresh air' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× To be honest, I don't have the color that I dislike uh, because I think every color has its own meaning.

✓ To be honest, I don't have a color that I dislike, because I think every color has its own meaning.

The phrase 'the color that I dislike' is too specific; 'a color' is more appropriate here as the speaker refers to any color they might dislike. Also, a comma is needed before 'because' to separate clauses.

× For example, red symbols, energy, black symbols come.

✓ For example, red symbolizes energy, and black symbolizes sadness.

The original sentence lacks verbs and proper structure. 'Symbols' should be 'symbolizes' to form a correct verb phrase. Also, 'black symbols come' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify what black symbolizes.

× So every color has has its own meaning when all the color combined together is like a painting can another?

✓ So every color has its own meaning, and when all the colors combine together, it is like a painting, isn't it?

The sentence has repeated words ('has has'), missing punctuation, and incorrect verb forms. 'Colors' should be plural, and 'combine' should be in present tense to agree with 'all the colors'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Well, most of my friends like the pink and blue colour.

✓ Well, most of my friends like pink and blue colours.

When referring to multiple colors, 'colours' should be plural without 'the' unless specifying particular colors. Also, 'pink and blue' are general colors, so no article is needed.

× You know, girls always like a romantic things, uh, they are full of imagination.

✓ You know, girls always like romantic things; they are full of imagination.

'A romantic things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

× So the pink is the uh, pink is their first choice and then the blue one.

✓ So pink is their first choice, and then blue is the second.

When talking about colors in general, articles like 'the' are unnecessary. Also, the sentence is rephrased for clarity and naturalness.

× Well the black color will makes me uncomfortable in my room because I work so hard.

✓ Well, the black color will make me uncomfortable in my room because I work so hard.

After modal verbs like 'will', the base form of the verb should be used. 'Will makes' is incorrect; it should be 'will make'.

× The black will remind me something bad and I feel I will feel depressed in that color.

✓ Black will remind me of something bad, and I feel I will feel depressed with that color.

'Remind me something' is incorrect; it should be 'remind me of something'. Also, 'in that color' is better expressed as 'with that color' to indicate association.