Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'whereas white symbolize peace,' say 'because white symbolizes peace.'

예시: My favorite colour is white because it symbolizes peace. Recently, I bought a new white T-shirt, and my father also loves this colour. Moreover, my younger brother often says that white doesn't absorb sunlight, which makes it comfortable to wear in summer.

제안: Your answer shows good ideas but has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Avoid phrases like 'in stomach' which are confusing. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, explain reasons clearly and use correct verb forms.

예시: From my perspective, I don't dislike any colour because each has its own value. However, I don't prefer black because it absorbs more sunlight and makes me feel hotter.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing pronouns and grammar errors. Make sure to use correct pronouns and sentence structure. Also, explain reasons logically and use linking words like 'because' properly.

예시: My friends and colleagues like different colours. For example, my close friend Dipasha likes black because she has a fair complexion and a nice personality, so black suits her well.

제안: Your answer is mostly clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using more natural phrasing. Use linking words like 'although' to show contrast and keep sentences concise.

예시: Although I chose green for my room walls, the painter used dark green instead, which makes me feel uncomfortable and uneasy.

× My favorite color is white, whereas white symbolize peace.

✓ My favorite color is white, whereas white symbolizes peace.

The verb 'symbolize' should be in the third person singular form 'symbolizes' to agree with the singular subject 'white'. In English, verbs in the present tense add an 's' for third person singular subjects.

× Recently I buy a new T-shirt of white color and my father also love white.

✓ Recently I bought a new white T-shirt and my father also loves white.

The verb 'buy' should be in the past tense 'bought' because the action happened recently in the past. Also, 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my father'. Additionally, 'of white color' is better expressed as 'white' before the noun.

× I'm inspired my young brother who always say white doesn't absorb sunlight.

✓ I'm inspired by my younger brother who always says white doesn't absorb sunlight.

The phrase 'I'm inspired my young brother' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm inspired by my younger brother' to use the correct passive construction. Also, 'say' should be 'says' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my younger brother'. 'Young' is better replaced with 'younger' when comparing siblings.

× According to my perspective, I don't dislike any colour because every colour has its own value and significance.

✓ From my perspective, I don't dislike any colour because every colour has its own value and significance.

The phrase 'According to my perspective' is not idiomatic. The correct preposition is 'From my perspective' to express personal viewpoint.

× Nevertheless, I don't like black colour because in stomach it absorbs more sunlight and give produce heat.

✓ Nevertheless, I don't like black colour because it absorbs more sunlight and produces heat in the stomach.

The pronoun 'it' should directly refer to 'black colour'. The phrase 'give produce heat' is incorrect; it should be 'produces heat'. Also, the placement of 'in stomach' is awkward; it is better placed at the end as 'in the stomach'.

× My friends as well as my colleagues like various colors, but my close friend Dipasha loves black colour because he's because she is a very nice personality and fair in colour, so that's why black colour suits her.

✓ My friends as well as my colleagues like various colors, but my close friend Dipasha loves black colour because she is a very nice person and fair in colour, so that's why black colour suits her.

The phrase 'he's because she is' is incorrect and confusing; it should be 'because she is'. Also, 'personality' is incorrectly used; 'person' is appropriate here.

× The one color which makes me uncomfortable in my room is dark green room, but it was my choice to paint the wall by green colour.

✓ The one color which makes me uncomfortable in my room is dark green, but it was my choice to paint the wall green.

The phrase 'dark green room' is incorrect; it should be 'dark green'. Also, 'paint the wall by green colour' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'paint the wall green'.

× However, the painter coloured my wall with dark green colour which makes me uneasy and uncomfortable.

✓ However, the painter coloured my wall with dark green colour, which makes me uneasy and uncomfortable.

A comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses properly. The tense is correct here.