Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Good direct response with relevant supporting detail and a clear reason. To improve, reduce minor grammatical errors and make the second sentence more concise and coherent by using appropriate linking words and correct collocation (e.g., “the gardens in the UK” not “of the UK”). Also avoid slightly poetic fragments that distract from clarity (e.g., “whispers of the birds” → “the sound of birds”).

예시: I like green because it makes me feel calm and happy. For example, on weekends I visit gardens in the UK or hike in the Scottish mountains, where the abundant greenery and the sound of birds help me relax.

제안: Answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and an unclear phrase (“I work instead” is confusing). Improve by correcting grammar (remove extra 's' in 'it's feels'; 'they makes' → 'they make'), clarifying actions (explain what you do instead of 'work'), and adding a linking word to connect reason and consequence. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

예시: I dislike red because it feels too stimulating and can make me feel angry or uneasy. For that reason, I avoid red in my home and choose blue or green decor instead, since they help me stay calm.

제안: Good specific context and reason linking preference to school experience. To improve, tighten the structure: start with a direct topic sentence, use a linking word to contrast, and fix minor grammar (e.g., 'school colour' → consistent spelling). Make the final contrast clearer by giving a brief reason why some dislike it.

예시: Many of my high school friends liked blue because it was our school colour and we wore blue uniforms for clubs like baseball and football. However, some disliked blue because they associated it too strongly with school rules.

제안: Clear and relevant answer with logical consequence. Improve by correcting minor punctuation/spacing and using a linking word to strengthen cohesion (e.g., 'consequently' or 'therefore'). Replace vague phrase 'make me feel sick' with more precise language if possible. Keep sentences concise and varied vocabulary ('bright colours' → 'bright colours like').

예시: Bright colours like red and yellow make me uncomfortable because they are overstimulating and can leave me feeling irritated. Therefore I avoid them at home and work and choose calming colours such as blue and green instead.

× I dislike red the most because it's feels too stimulating to me and it sometimes makes me feel angry and uneasy.

✓ I dislike red the most because it feels too stimulating to me and it sometimes makes me feel angry and uneasy.

The error is using 'it's feels' where both 'it is' and the verb 'feels' appear; only one verb form is needed. This is a third person singular subject (it) with a present simple verb. Remove the redundant 'is' so the correct form is 'it feels'. Suggestion: Use 'it feels' for third person singular in present simple; avoid combining 'is' with another finite verb.

× Therefore, I avoid using red items in my home and I work instead.

✓ Therefore, I avoid using red items in my home and at work instead.

The original sentence 'I work instead' sounds ungrammatical and lacks the preposition to contrast locations. This is a third person/subject context confusion and preposition use; correct phrasing is 'at work' to indicate location. Suggestion: Use parallel prepositional phrases 'in my home and at work' for clarity.

× I prefer using blue and green items because they makes me feel calm.

✓ I prefer using blue and green items because they make me feel calm.

Subject 'they' is plural, so the verb must be base form 'make' (plural agreement). This is a subject-verb agreement/third person plural issue. Suggestion: Match verb form to subject number: 'they make' not 'they makes'.

× For example, on weekends I sometimes visit the gardens of the UK or mountains of Scotland, where there is a lot of greenery and whispers of the birds.

✓ For example, on weekends I sometimes visit the gardens in the UK or the mountains of Scotland, where there is a lot of greenery and the whispering of birds.

Use 'in the UK' and 'the mountains of Scotland' or 'the mountains in Scotland' for correct location prepositions and articles. 'Whispers of the birds' is awkward; use 'the whispering of birds' or 'birds' whispers'. Suggestion: Use 'in' for countries, include 'the' for mountain ranges, and use natural noun phrases for sounds.

× Especially among my high school friends, many of them love blue because our school color was blue and we had to wear blue uniforms for club activities such as baseball and football.

✓ Especially among my high school friends, many of them love blue because our school color was blue and we had to wear blue uniforms for club activities such as baseball and football.

No grammatical change required; sentence is acceptable. However, note that 'color' is American spelling and consistent usage is fine. No preposition error detected. Suggestion: Keep consistency in spelling ('colour' vs 'color').

× I don't like bright colors such as red and yellow because they seem over stimulating and sometimes make me feel sick or irritated.

✓ I don't like bright colors such as red and yellow because they seem overstimulating and sometimes make me feel sick or irritated.

'Over stimulating' should be a single compound adjective or participle 'overstimulating' to modify 'colors' or the verb 'seem'. Combine into one word. Suggestion: Use 'overstimulating' as one word when used as an adjective or gerund.

× So I usually avoid red and yellow items both at my home and at my workplace.

✓ So I usually avoid red and yellow items both at my home and at my workplace.

Sentence is grammatically correct; pronoun use is fine. Suggestion: You can shorten to 'at home and at work' for naturalness.

× Instead I usually use blue and green ones.

✓ Instead, I usually use blue and green ones.

No verb -ing error present; sentence is fine but needs a comma after 'Instead' for clarity. Suggestion: Add a comma after introductory adverb 'Instead'.