Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and pronoun usage (e.g., "reminds me," "calms me," "it gives me").

예시: My favorite color is blue because it reminds me of the ocean and the sky. For example, seeing blue usually calms me after a busy day, so I feel more peaceful when my clothes or room include blue.

제안: Give a complete, grammatical answer and expand with one specific reason or short example. Use linking words (e.g., "because," "for instance") and finish your sentence. Avoid sentence fragments.

예시: I dislike the color black because it often feels heavy and gloomy to me. For instance, when a room has a lot of black furniture, I feel less cheerful and prefer brighter colors instead.

제안: Use clearer grammar and a complete supporting detail. State the topic, then add a coherent reason and a short example. Replace vague phrases with specific contexts (e.g., "special occasions").

예시: Most of my friends prefer red because it suggests energy and confidence. For example, they often wear red dresses or shirts at parties or special occasions to stand out and look bold.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence then explain why using correct grammar and one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like "because" and avoid word order errors (e.g., "it doesn't make me feel peaceful").

예시: Black makes me uncomfortable in my room because it doesn't make me feel peaceful. I prefer lighter colors like pale blue or cream because they make the room feel brighter and more relaxing.

× My favorite color is blue because it's reminds me of sky or ocean or sea.

✓ My favorite color is blue because it reminds me of the sky, the ocean, or the sea.

The contraction 'it's' (it is) is incorrect before the verb 'reminds'; the third person singular present simple requires the verb form 'reminds' without 'is'. Also, countable nouns 'sky' and 'ocean/sea' typically take the definite article 'the' when referring to specific things, and items in a series should be separated by commas. Suggestion: remove 'it's' and use 'it reminds' and add 'the' before 'sky' and 'ocean' or 'sea' as appropriate.

× It's called me down and it's give me peace and it's relax me whenever I see it everywhere.

✓ It calms me down, it gives me peace, and it relaxes me whenever I see it.

Multiple errors: 'called me down' is wrong; the correct verb is 'calm' in third person singular 'calms'. 'It's give' uses 'it's' (it is) incorrectly with base verb; use 'gives'. 'It's relax me' should be 'relaxes me'. Also avoid 'whenever I see it everywhere' (redundant); 'whenever I see it' is sufficient. Suggestion: use correct third person singular forms 'calms/gives/relaxes' and simplify 'whenever I see it'.

× I don't like the color black because it doesn't make me feel peaceful or relaxed. A lot of black. It makes me feel gloomy and.

✓ I don't like the color black because it doesn't make me feel peaceful or relaxed. A lot of black makes me feel gloomy.

The fragment 'A lot of black.' is incomplete; it needs a verb and subject combined into one sentence: 'A lot of black makes me feel gloomy.' The final 'It makes me feel gloomy and.' is cut off and redundant. Suggestion: combine ideas into one complete sentence and remove the trailing conjunction 'and'.

× Most of my friends prefer the color red because it's love and energy.

✓ Most of my friends prefer the color red because it represents love and energy.

Saying 'it's love and energy' is ungrammatical; use a verb like 'represents' or 'symbolizes' to link the color to abstract concepts. 'Represents' is third person singular and fits the present-tense general statement. Suggestion: use 'represents' or 'symbolizes' to describe meaning.

× They often wear red when they want to look bold or stylish, especially at parties or on special. Still great.

✓ They often wear red when they want to look bold or stylish, especially at parties or on special occasions. It still looks great.

'On special' is incomplete; the correct phrase is 'on special occasions.' 'Still great' is a fragment; convert it to a full sentence such as 'It still looks great.' Suggestion: use the full noun phrase 'special occasions' and complete the fragment into a full sentence.

× The color black because don't give me peaceful or will me and I prefer lighter color to my room.

✓ The color black doesn't make me feel peaceful, and I prefer lighter colors in my room.

Multiple issues: missing subject-verb contraction 'doesn't' should be used with 'the color black' (third person singular). 'Don't give me peaceful' is incorrect; use 'doesn't make me feel peaceful.' 'Will me' is ungrammatical and likely an error—remove it. 'Lighter color' should be plural 'lighter colors' or 'a lighter color', and the preposition 'to my room' should be 'in my room.' Suggestion: use 'doesn't make me feel...', choose singular/plural consistently ('a lighter color' or 'lighter colors'), and use 'in my room.'