Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบของคุณไม่ชัดเจนและมีความสับสน ควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดติดขัดหรือคำที่ไม่จำเป็น เพื่อให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติและเข้าใจง่าย

예시: No, I'm not very good at giving gifts because I don't celebrate many occasions and I only have a few close friends.

제안: คำตอบควรเชื่อมโยงประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความสมเหตุสมผล รวมถึงให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและครบถ้วนมากขึ้น

예시: I usually give gifts to others on their birthdays because they are important people to me, and I want to make them feel special on their day.

제안: คำตอบควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

예시: When choosing a gift, I consider the person's taste, style, favorite color, and what they like most, such as animated movies or figurines.

제안: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหล รวมถึงใช้คำกริยาในรูปแบบที่ถูกต้องเพื่อความชัดเจน

예시: Yes, when I was young, I used to make handmade cards for Mother's Day or Father's Day, writing about good things and my feelings for them. It made me feel really good.

제안: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงเชื่อมโยงประโยคให้สมเหตุสมผลและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

예시: For me, expensive gifts do not better express my feelings because I don't usually use expensive things in my daily life. I prefer homemade gifts because they feel more personal.

× No, I'm not quite that good for giving give two orders because.

✓ No, I'm not quite that good at giving gifts because.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used with 'good' here. The correct preposition to express ability is 'good at'. Also, 'give two orders' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'giving gifts' fits the context better.

× I usually give gifts to orders when it is their birthdays.

✓ I usually give gifts to others when it is their birthdays.

The word 'orders' is incorrect; the intended word is 'others'. This is a plural noun referring to other people.

× Because they are a important people to me and I want to make them feel special.

✓ Because they are important people to me and I want to make them feel special.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'people'. 'Important' is an adjective modifying 'people' and does not need an article here.

× For me, when I have to choose a gift, I will consider about their taste, their style, life there.

✓ For me, when I have to choose a gift, I will consider their taste, their style, their life.

The verb 'consider' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'there' is a typo and should be 'their' to indicate possession.

× an what do they like the most for simple animation's movie or figure?

✓ and what do they like the most, a simple animation movie or figure?

The phrase 'animation's movie' is incorrect; it should be 'animation movie' without the possessive 's'. Also, 'an' should be 'a' before a consonant sound.

× Yes, when I was young. When it was Mother's Day or Father's Day, I will I would do a card an wrote about good things an my feeling for them an it.

✓ Yes, when I was young, on Mother's Day or Father's Day, I would make a card and write about good things and my feelings for them.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'Will' should be removed as the action is in the past. 'Do a card' is better expressed as 'make a card'. 'Wrote' should be 'write' after 'would'. Also, 'an' should be 'and'.

× Really. Feel good that time.

✓ It really felt good at that time.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb. 'Feel' should be in past tense 'felt' to match 'that time'. Adding 'It' as subject completes the sentence.

× For me, no, because I don't see that expensive thing.

✓ For me, no, because I don't see that expensive thing as necessary.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'as necessary' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'thing' is singular and acceptable here.

× It is necessary for me because in my ordinary life I don't use that much of expensive thing and I don't see the point of using it.

✓ It is not necessary for me because in my ordinary life I don't use many expensive things and I don't see the point of using them.

'That much of expensive thing' is incorrect. 'Many expensive things' is correct for countable plural nouns. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'things'.

× I can you.

✓ I can use you.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Possibly intended 'I can use you' or 'I can give you'. Without context, 'I can use you' is a correction but may not fit meaning.

× I prefer to have a homemade gift.

✓ I prefer to receive a homemade gift.

'Have' is vague here; 'receive' is more appropriate when talking about getting gifts.