Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên tránh những từ không phù hợp hoặc sai chính tả như "Icing" hay "edificant". Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

예시: I'm not very good at giving gifts because I often spend a lot of time thinking about what to buy. I believe it depends on the personality of the person I'm giving the gift to.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý hợp lý. Sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý và làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I usually give gifts to others on their birthdays. For example, I give presents to my teachers on special occasions like Teacher's Day or during holidays.

제안: Bạn đã có ý tưởng tốt nhưng câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi sai và bổ sung liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cụ thể hơn về những điều bạn cân nhắc khi chọn quà.

예시: When choosing a gift, I consider its meaning and whether it can express my feelings and appreciation. I also think about the recipient's hobbies to make the gift more personal.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ sai, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi sai và sắp xếp ý hợp lý. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về những món quà tự làm bạn đã tặng.

예시: Yes, I have. For example, I often make handmade gifts like cakes or flower arrangements for my close friends' birthdays.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh sử dụng từ không phù hợp hoặc không rõ nghĩa như "Chief Keef". Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng quan điểm của bạn.

예시: I don't think expensive gifts always express feelings better. Handmade gifts often mean more because they show effort and thoughtfulness, depending on the person's personality.

× Icing is maybe not.

✓ I am maybe not good at it.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb agreement and does not use the correct present tense form. 'Icing' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The correction uses the present tense 'am' to agree with the subject 'I'.

× Sometimes I have to spend a lot of time to consider what I want to buy.

✓ Sometimes I have to spend a lot of time considering what I want to buy.

The verb 'spend' is usually followed by a gerund (-ing form) rather than an infinitive. Using 'considering' is grammatically correct here.

× Giving it to my friends or my parents edificant a gift.

✓ Giving it to my friends or my parents is giving a gift.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'is giving a gift' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I think it's depend on each personality.

✓ I think it depends on each personality.

The verb 'depend' needs to be in the third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'.

× I usually give gifts for others usually on their birthday or for example for my teacher I usually give it on their teacher they or in my or something special occasion like that holiday or a special party.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on their birthday or, for example, to my teacher on special occasions like holidays or parties.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect when indicating the recipient of gifts; 'to' is correct. The sentence is also restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I always consider other meaning of the things that I want to buy to give it as a present.

✓ I always consider the meaning of the things that I want to buy to give as a present.

The phrase 'other meaning' is incorrect; 'the meaning' is appropriate here. Also, 'consider' is followed by a noun phrase without 'other'.

× I mean I want to express my feeling, my appreciation to orders.

✓ I mean I want to express my feelings, my appreciation to others.

'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context. 'Orders' is a mispronunciation or typo; 'others' is the correct pronoun here.

× So I consider about the meaning an about the hobbies of this per.

✓ So I consider the meaning and the hobbies of this person.

The verb 'consider' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'an' should be 'and', and 'per' is a typo for 'person'.

× Yes, of course, especially on my close friend party or my motor birthday.

✓ Yes, of course, especially at my close friend's party or my mother's birthday.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect for events; 'at' is correct. Also, 'motor' is a typo for 'mother'.

× I usually make ahead make gifts such at a cake or maybe that can be a. Give flight.

✓ I usually make handmade gifts such as a cake or maybe a gift flight.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Make ahead make gifts' is incorrect; 'make handmade gifts' is correct. 'Give flight' is unclear; possibly 'gift flight' or 'gift' is intended.

× Flowers that I make myself.

✓ I also make flowers myself.

The original is a sentence fragment. The correction forms a complete sentence.

× I say is maybe not because, UM, for example, Chief Keef, I mean the gift that you make by yourself that had met everyone like that more than the expensive gift because.

✓ I would say maybe not because, for example, the gift that you make yourself means more to everyone than an expensive gift.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar.

× It depends on their personality.

✓ It depends on their personality.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.