Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid unrelated or unclear phrases, and keep your answer concise and natural. Use linking words if you add supporting details.

예시: No, I'm not very good at giving gifts. I usually prefer to give presents only to close family members because I find it easier to choose something meaningful for them.

제안: Your answer has some good points but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct grammar, be specific, and organise your answer logically with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays. For instance, I gave my mother a nice perfume for her birthday last year. Also, I once gave a gift to my sister when she completed her degree.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to form complete sentences and clearly explain your ideas. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific details.

예시: When choosing a gift, I consider what the person likes the most. Therefore, I try to select something that matches their interests or preferences.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to speak in complete sentences, clarify your ideas, and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: No, I have never given handmade gifts to others. However, when I was in school, I made handmade cards and gave them to my teachers.

제안: Your answer shows your opinion but is not clearly expressed. Use complete sentences, avoid abrupt phrases, and explain your reasoning with specific details and linking words.

예시: I don't think expensive gifts better express feelings. What matters more is the thought and care behind the gift, rather than its price.

× But I only recommend giving gifts to our family members. North Sands. Not any other person who don't know. That very much.

✓ But I only recommend giving gifts to our family members, not to any other person whom I don't know very well.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'who don't know' instead of 'whom I don't know'. 'Whom' is the correct object pronoun here, and the sentence structure was fragmented. Also, 'That very much' is unclear and unnecessary.

× I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthday.

✓ I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays.

The word 'birthday' should be pluralized to 'birthdays' when referring to special occasions in general. Also, 'on' is the correct preposition for occasions.

× For example, I give gives incentive to decently my mother's birthday.

✓ For example, I give gifts to celebrate my mother's birthday.

'Gives' is incorrect here; it should be 'gifts'. The phrase 'incentive to decently' is incorrect and unclear; 'to celebrate' is appropriate. Also, 'birthday' is singular here, which is correct since it refers to a specific birthday.

× I give them a goal drink.

✓ I give her a cold drink.

'Goal drink' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'cold drink' is the correct phrase. 'Them' should be 'her' to match the singular recipient (mother).

× But one time I gave gift to my sister because she complete her degree.

✓ But one time I gave a gift to my sister because she completed her degree.

'Gave' is past tense, so 'complete' should be 'completed' to maintain tense consistency. Also, 'a gift' requires the article 'a'.

× I consider the person tries when I'm choosing a gift what the person mostly like.

✓ I consider what the person mostly likes when I'm choosing a gift.

The original sentence is awkward and uses 'tries' incorrectly. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses the correct verb form 'likes' for third person singular.

× So I give the gift but. She or she wants.

✓ So I give the gift that she wants.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a clear sentence with correct pronoun usage.

× No, I never made handmade gifts.

✓ No, I have never made handmade gifts.

The present perfect tense 'have never made' is more appropriate here to indicate experience up to now.

× I never give. Weather handmade gift, but when I was in school I.

✓ I have never given handmade gifts, but when I was in school, I...

The sentence is fragmented and 'Weather' is incorrect; it should be 'whether'. Also, 'give' should be 'given' in present perfect tense. The sentence needs completion.

× I make I made gifts, handmade cards and give it to their teachers.

✓ I made gifts, handmade cards, and gave them to my teachers.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and pronoun errors. 'Make' should be 'made', 'give' should be 'gave', and 'their teachers' should be 'my teachers' to match the subject.

× Never. The statement is totally wrong. We can't express our feelings to gift so expensive groups it depends on.

✓ Never. The statement is totally wrong. We can't express our feelings through expensive gifts; it depends on...

The phrase 'to gift so expensive groups it depends on' is incorrect and unclear. 'Through expensive gifts' is the correct expression. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for clarity.

× But you actually feel for the person.

✓ But what really matters is how you feel for the person.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper pronoun and sentence structure.