Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Make your answer more natural by completing your thoughts and using clear sentence structures. For example, explain why you think you are not good at giving gifts and mention specific experiences.

예시: No, I'm not very good at giving gifts because I rarely receive gifts myself. Usually, only my immediate family like my wife and children give me presents, so I don't have much practice choosing gifts for others.

제안: Complete your sentences and avoid abrupt endings. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to enrich your answer.

예시: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, Christmas, and other holidays. For example, I often give presents to my child on their birthday or when they achieve something important.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Focus on directly answering the question with clear sentences. Use linking words to explain your thought process and give specific examples.

예시: When choosing a gift, I usually consider what the recipient likes or wishes to have. For instance, during birthdays, I check their wish list to select something they truly want.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using better grammar and linking words. Try to avoid repetition and make your sentences more natural.

예시: No, I have never given a handmade gift because I don't know how to make one. Instead, I usually buy gifts from department stores based on what the recipients want.

제안: Good answer with clear opinion. To improve, avoid small grammar mistakes and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Sometimes, expensive gifts better express my feelings because I believe the recipient feels special when receiving them. However, I also think that the thought behind the gift is more important than its price.

× No, I'm not good at giving giving gifts because I seldom receive gifts from any people.

✓ No, I'm not good at giving gifts because I seldom receive gifts from people.

The phrase 'any people' is incorrect here; 'people' without 'any' is more natural in this context. Also, the word 'giving' is repeated twice, which is a typographical error. Removing the extra 'giving' and 'any' improves clarity and correctness.

× I just received gift from my immediate family like my wife, my children and.

✓ I just receive gifts from my immediate family like my wife and my children.

The word 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' because it refers to multiple items from family members. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should end properly. Changing 'received' to 'receive' matches the habitual action implied.

× I usually give gifts to others on special occasions like their birthdays, anniversary, during Christmas and holidays.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on special occasions like their birthdays, anniversaries, Christmas, and holidays.

The word 'anniversary' should be plural 'anniversaries' to match 'birthdays'. Also, 'during Christmas and holidays' is better expressed as 'Christmas and holidays' without 'during' for parallel structure.

× For example, I give gifts to my child's birthday or any achievements that they.

✓ For example, I give gifts for my child's birthday or any achievements they have.

The phrase 'give gifts to my child's birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'give gifts for my child's birthday'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs 'they have' to complete the thought.

× I usually consider when choosing a game, but considering the things that the recipients like or wish to have.

✓ I usually consider the things that the recipients like or wish to have when choosing a gift.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering the sentence to place the main clause first and removing 'considering' as a gerund improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Like for example in giving gifts during their birthdays, I usually consider their wish list like receiving.

✓ For example, when giving gifts during their birthdays, I usually consider their wish list.

The phrase 'like receiving' is incomplete and unclear. Removing it and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I haven't tried to give others a handmade gift because I usually don't know how to create it or made a gift out of handmade.

✓ No, I haven't tried to give others a handmade gift because I usually don't know how to create it or make a gift by hand.

The phrase 'made a gift out of handmade' is incorrect. 'Made' should be 'make' to match the present tense 'don't know how to'. Also, 'by hand' is a more natural expression than 'out of handmade'.

× I usually buy gifts in department stores considering the things that they want.

✓ I usually buy gifts at department stores considering the things that they want.

The correct preposition for locations like stores is 'at' rather than 'in'. Using 'at' improves the naturalness and correctness of the sentence.

× Sometimes expensive gives better express my feelings because I believe they will feel special when receiving a an expensive gift.

✓ Sometimes expensive gifts better express my feelings because I believe they will feel special when receiving an expensive gift.

The word 'gives' is incorrect; it should be the plural noun 'gifts'. Also, 'a an' is a typographical error; only 'an' is needed before 'expensive gift'.