Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi số nhiều không đúng ("in a creative ways") và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy giving handmade gifts. I usually make a list of things the recipient might like and create the gifts in creative ways to make them special.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp ("presence" thay vì "presents"?), và câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về thời điểm bạn thường tặng quà và dùng từ vựng chính xác.

예시: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays and holidays because it's a way to show my appreciation and strengthen relationships.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ ("make their lasting impression" nên là "leave a lasting impression"), đồng thời câu nên mạch lạc hơn với liên từ phù hợp.

예시: When choosing a gift, I consider something that will leave a lasting impression. Therefore, I often make handmade gifts like photo albums or custom mugs to make them unique.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý viết hoa không đúng chỗ ("Remember Me") và câu cuối nên rõ ràng hơn. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I have made a personalized mug with the recipient's images printed on it. So, when they drink from it, they remember me. I think it is both a practical and meaningful gift.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp ("it is also doubtful" không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và dùng từ phù hợp để thể hiện ý tưởng.

예시: Not really. I don't choose gifts based on their price. Instead, I prefer presents that are practical and meaningful because I believe the meaning behind the gift is what matters most.

× Therefore I always make a list that includes the things that the receiver may like and make them in a creative ways to embrace them.

✓ Therefore I always make a list that includes the things that the receiver may like and make them in creative ways to embrace them.

The phrase 'a creative ways' is incorrect because 'ways' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The correct form is 'creative ways' without 'a'.

× Also, they can send the messages through the presence.

✓ Also, they can send messages through the presents.

The word 'presence' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'presents' meaning gifts. 'Presence' means the state of being present, which does not fit the context.

× Moreover, it can make someone stay and promote the positive.

✓ Moreover, it can make someone stay and promote positivity.

The phrase 'promote the positive' is awkward and unclear. 'Positivity' is the correct noun form to express promoting positive feelings or attitudes.

× When I choose a gift, I want something that can impress and make their lasting impression.

✓ When I choose a gift, I want something that can impress and leave a lasting impression.

The phrase 'make their lasting impression' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'leave a lasting impression'. Also, 'their' is vague here; 'a' is more appropriate.

× Therefore, I always make a handmade gift with a creative way such as photo albums or custom mug.

✓ Therefore, I always make a handmade gift in a creative way such as photo albums or custom mugs.

The phrase 'with a creative way' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in a creative way'. Also, 'custom mug' should be plural 'custom mugs' to match 'photo albums'.

× I've made a personalized mug and I've printed the images of the receiver into it.

✓ I've made a personalized mug and I've printed the image of the receiver on it.

'Images' should be singular 'image' if referring to one picture. Also, the correct preposition is 'on' for printing on a mug, not 'into'.

× Therefore, when they are drinking, they can Remember Me and I think it is both practical and meaningful present.

✓ Therefore, when they are drinking, they can remember me and I think it is both a practical and meaningful present.

'Remember Me' should not be capitalized mid-sentence. Also, 'practical and meaningful present' needs the article 'a' before 'practical'.

× However, I choose a present that not only practical, but it is also doubtful.

✓ However, I choose a present that is not only practical, but also thoughtful.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'that'. Also, 'doubtful' is incorrect in this context; 'thoughtful' is the appropriate adjective.