Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I believe I am good at giving gifts to my family and friends because I enjoy finding suitable presents for different people. They are often surprised and happy when I give them gifts personally.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议明确表达时间点，避免重复词汇，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

예시: I usually give gifts during traditional festivals like the Spring Festival or on special occasions because it is a long-standing tradition and a way to show respect to others.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议简化句子，明确表达考虑因素，并使用连贯的连接词。

예시: When choosing a gift, I consider whether it is useful and suitable for the person. Most importantly, I think about whether they will like it or not.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达经历，使用正确时态和句子结构。

예시: Yes, about three years ago, I made a handmade gift for my father on Father's Day because I had never given him a handmade present before.

제안: 回答较好，但结尾不完整，建议完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并适当丰富词汇。

예시: I believe that expensive gifts can better express my feelings, especially if they are useful and the person truly likes them. For example, giving a thoughtful and valuable present shows that I care deeply and am willing to invest both time and money to make them happy.

× Well, I am really interesting, interested to find the suitable gift to different people.

✓ Well, I am really interested to find the suitable gift for different people.

这里“interesting”是形容词，意思是“有趣的”，而学生想表达的是“感兴趣”，应该用“interested”。另外，介词应为“for”而非“to”，表示“为不同的人找到合适的礼物”。

× And I think, uh, they receive the gift. They also were very surprised because I give them by myself.

✓ And I think, uh, they received the gift. They were also very surprised because I gave it to them myself.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去式。这里“receive”应改为“received”，“give”应改为“gave”。另外，“by myself”改为“to them myself”更符合表达习惯。

× I think it's one of tradition that have lasted for a long time and also it's a attitude to others.

✓ I think it's one of the traditions that have lasted for a long time and also it's an attitude towards others.

“tradition”应使用复数形式“traditions”，因为是“one of the ...”。“attitude”前应使用不定冠词“an”。“to others”应改为“towards others”，表示“对他人的态度”。

× Well, for choosing a gift to someone I will consider about is it this gift it is useful and whether it is suit for her or he.

✓ Well, when choosing a gift for someone, I will consider whether this gift is useful and whether it suits her or him.

“consider about”错误，动词“consider”后不加“about”。“suit”应使用第三人称单数形式“suits”，因为主语是单数“it”。“for her or he”应改为“for her or him”，宾格形式。

× And the most important to think about is is it he or she will like this one not think or she she like she will not have interested on it.

✓ And the most important thing to think about is whether he or she will like this one, not whether she will not be interested in it.

句子结构混乱，缺少名词“thing”。“is it he or she will like”应改为“whether he or she will like”。“have interested on it”错误，应为“be interested in it”。

× Yes, I have like about 3 years ago, I have a handmade gift for my father.

✓ Yes, about 3 years ago, I made a handmade gift for my father.

“have like about 3 years ago”时态和表达错误，应该用过去式“made”。“have a handmade gift”表达不清，应改为“made a handmade gift”。

× It is, that is the Father's Day and I think umm, I haven't give he a handmade gift so I made it uh, like a.

✓ It was on Father's Day, and I think, umm, I hadn't given him a handmade gift before, so I made one.

描述过去事件应使用过去时，“is”改为“was”。“haven't give he”错误，正确为“hadn't given him”。“made it uh, like a”不完整，改为“made one”更通顺。

× I believe that expensive gift can better express my feelings, especially if the gift is useful and sometimes the person really likes.

✓ I believe that an expensive gift can better express my feelings, especially if the gift is useful and something the person really likes.

“expensive gift”前应加不定冠词“an”。“sometimes”用法不当，应改为“something”表示“某样东西”。

× For example, when I give a thoughtful and valuable present, it shows that I care deeply and am willing to invest both time and money to make them happy. This kind of gift can make.

✓ For example, when I give a thoughtful and valuable present, it shows that I care deeply and am willing to invest both time and money to make them happy. This kind of gift can make a big difference.

句子不完整，“This kind of gift can make.”缺少宾语，补充完整使句意明确。