Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서
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Part 1
시험관
Are you good at giving gifts?
수험생
Yes, yes, definitely I am because you know every time I finish, finish my travel and I will buy some gifts of my family and one gift for each person's this based on a different person's personalities.
시험관
When do you usually give gifts to others?
수험생
Well, normally, umm, the important festivals, you know like Spring festival, Mid Autumn festival, which, yeah, so I often buy very expensive gifts for my family's my, for my parents. I will buy them some.
시험관
What do you consider when choosing a gift?
수험생
One where I am choosing choosing a gift, I will consider whether the product quality is good or not enough and the the second question I should consider is the price and double check out if.
시험관
Have you ever given others a handmade gift?
수험생
Uh, yes, I have to think, umm, one hand may give it to my kids. So actually it was, uh, refrigerant paper plain. Yeah. So I learned how to fold it from the Internet. But you know my case, They're very.
시험관
Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?
수험생
No, actually I don't think so because I can't afford to pay the expensive gifts and it can be not guaranteed the quality of expensive gift. So I think some give just made by my hands would be more.
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총점
Part 1
Are you good at giving gifts?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且更清晰地表达观点。
예시: Yes, I am good at giving gifts because I always buy presents for my family after traveling. I choose gifts based on each person's personality.
When do you usually give gifts to others?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用完整句子，避免口语填充词，并且明确表达时间和对象。
예시: I usually give gifts during important festivals like the Spring Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival. For my parents, I often buy expensive gifts.
What do you consider when choosing a gift?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议结构清晰，完整表达考虑因素，并使用连接词使句子连贯。
예시: When I choose a gift, I consider the product's quality first. Besides, I also check the price to make sure it is reasonable.
Have you ever given others a handmade gift?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答含糊不清且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地描述经历，避免口语填充词，并补充细节使内容完整。
예시: Yes, I have given handmade gifts to my children. For example, I folded paper crafts that I learned from the Internet.
Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?
점수: 60.0제안: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并用连接词增强逻辑性。
예시: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. Sometimes, handmade gifts show more sincerity and care.
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