Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain your approach to choosing gifts.

예시: Yes, I am good at giving gifts because I consider the recipient's preferences and try to choose something useful for them.

제안: Your answer is clear but repetitive with 'special occasions' mentioned twice. Try to use linking words and be more specific about the occasions to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays, Diwali, and Lohri, which are important celebrations in my culture.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many fillers. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary hesitation. Use linking words to explain your main consideration when choosing gifts.

예시: When choosing a gift, I mainly consider its usefulness because I believe a gift should be practical and appreciated by the recipient.

제안: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has grammatical errors. Use complete sentences and add linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

예시: Yes, when I was a child, I made a handmade card for my best friend and sent it to him as a gift.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your thoughts logically using linking words and correct grammar to express your opinion clearly.

예시: No, I don't think expensive gifts better express feelings. What matters more is choosing a gift that is useful and meaningful to the person, regardless of its cost.

× Yes definitely I am good at giving gift to someone because this depend on their opinion and then I choose to give which is useful for them.

✓ Yes definitely I am good at giving gifts to someone because this depends on their opinion and then I choose to give what is useful for them.

The word 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' because it refers to giving in general, not just one gift. Also, 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'this'. 'Which' should be replaced with 'what' to correctly refer to the thing that is useful.

× Yes definitely I am good at giving gift to someone because this depend on their opinion and then I choose to give which is useful for them.

✓ Yes definitely I am good at giving gifts to someone because this depends on their opinion and then I choose to give what is useful for them.

The verb 'depend' must be in third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'this'.

× Generally I send gifts to others on the special occasions like on their birthday, on special occasions, Diwali, Lodi like this.

✓ Generally I send gifts to others on special occasions like their birthday, Diwali, Lodi, and so on.

The phrase 'the special occasions' is incorrect; 'special occasions' without 'the' is appropriate here. Also, 'on their birthday' is better as 'their birthday' without 'on' for smoother expression. The list should be separated properly and 'like this' replaced with 'and so on' for clarity.

× Mostly at the time, I consider that one thing, which is, uh, I think in my perspective, I just think about that, umm, gifts are useful, which is unuseless.

✓ Mostly, at the time, I consider one thing, which is, I think, from my perspective, that gifts should be useful, not useless.

The sentence is awkward and contains redundant phrases. 'In my perspective' should be 'from my perspective'. 'Unuseless' is not a word; the correct opposite of 'useful' is 'useless'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, when I was child I made gift for my best friend and I made card for him and then I sent to him and.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I made a gift for my best friend, and I made a card for him and then I sent it to him.

The phrase 'when I was child' needs the article 'a' before 'child'. 'Gift' and 'card' need the article 'a' as they are singular countable nouns. 'Sent to him and' is incomplete; it should be 'sent it to him.'

× No, there is no matter about the cost. It's depend on the choice and gift is useful or necessary.

✓ No, the cost does not matter. It depends on the choice and whether the gift is useful or necessary.

'There is no matter about the cost' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'the cost does not matter'. 'It's depend' should be 'it depends' for subject-verb agreement. Also, 'gift is useful or necessary' needs 'whether' to connect the ideas properly.

× If if gift is expensive but not in use but not useful then gift iste.

✓ If the gift is expensive but not useful, then the gift is useless.

'Gift' needs the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific gift. 'Not in use but not useful' is redundant; 'not useful' suffices. 'Iste' is a typo and should be 'useless' or 'not useful'.

× It's not depend on the feelings.

✓ It does not depend on the feelings.

'It's not depend' is incorrect; the correct form is 'It does not depend' to express negation in present tense. Also, 'feelings' is plural and correctly used here.