Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin ve cümleleri daha kısa, doğrudan ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla birleştirin. Özellikle "listen people" yerine "listen to people" gibi doğru edat kullanımına dikkat edin; ayrıca zaman uyumuna (present simple vs past simple) önem verin. Gösterilecek gelişim: 1) Konu cümlesiyle başlayın, 2) Kısa destekleyici cümleler kullanın, 3) 'because' ve 'so' gibi bağlaçları uygun yerlerde kullanın.

예시: Yes, I think I'm good at choosing gifts because I listen carefully to people. For example, I pay attention to what they like and need, so I can pick something they will really enjoy. As a result, they are usually very happy when they receive my presents.

제안: Cümlelerinizi zaman ve yapı açısından düzeltin; "when there are a birthday" yerine "on birthdays" gibi doğal ifadeler kullanın. Ayrıca karmaşık düşünceleri birkaç kısa cümleye bölün ve bağlaçlarla ilişkilendirin. Bu, akıcılığı ve netliği artırır. Örneğin seyahatle ilgili kısmı ayrı bir cümlede belirtin.

예시: I usually give gifts to my family and friends on birthdays. Also, whenever I travel abroad, I bring small presents for them. I enjoy doing this because it shows how much I care.

제안: Cümle yarım kalmış ve mantıksal bağlar eksik; cümlenizi tamamlayın ve fikirlerinizi sıralamak için bağlaçlar kullanın (for example, and also, however). "because of I am a student" yanlış, doğrusu "because I am a student". Ayrıca son kısmı ("but I never") mutlaka tamamlayın — ne yapmadığınızı belirtin.

예시: I consider my friends' and family's needs and preferences first. Because I am a student, I also think about the price and try to find something affordable. However, I never buy a gift without thinking about whether the person will actually like it.

제안: Geçmiş zaman kiplerini doğru kullanın ("When I was a child, I always wrote letters"). Ayrıca kelime tekrarlarını ve anlamsal hataları düzeltin (ör. "made made" ve "so they could" belirsiz). Destekleyici ayrıntılar verin: ne tür kağıt figürler yaptığınızı veya bir örnek anınızı kısaca anlatın.

예시: Yes. When I was a child, I often wrote letters to my family and friends. I also made small paper figures, like animals or flowers, and gave them as gifts. They always liked these handmade presents.

제안: Dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimine dikkat edin: "is not being impressed" yerine "is not impressed"; "my another friend" yerine "another friend of mine"; "expensive kids" yanlış, doğrusu "expensive gifts". Cevabınızı örneklerle destekleyin ve kısa sonuca bağlayın.

예시: I think it depends on the person. For example, my best friend is not impressed by expensive gifts because he values time and thought more, but another friend of mine feels more appreciated when a gift is expensive. So I try to choose gifts based on what the person values.

× I listen people carefully and I usually easily understanding what are those people's needs and wants.

✓ I listen to people carefully and I usually easily understand what their needs and wants are.

Incorrect use of verb + -ing and missing preposition: 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. 'Understanding' is a present participle; here the simple present 'understand' is required to match 'usually'. Also word order for 'what their needs and wants are' is more natural in English. Suggestion: use 'listen to' and simple present verb 'understand' for habitual actions.

× When I gave their gifts to them, they always be so happy.

✓ When I give them gifts, they are always so happy.

Incorrect 'there be' type: 'be' is incorrectly used with 'always' and past tense 'gave' mismatched with habitual meaning. Use simple present 'give' for habitual actions and 'are always' for present state. Suggestion: use consistent tense (simple present) for habits.

× I usually give gifts to my friends and my family when there are a birthday and when I went in going abroad I always bringing presents with me to give my family and my friends.

✓ I usually give gifts to my friends and family on birthdays, and when I go abroad I always bring presents with me to give to them.

Multiple errors: article and noun number ('a birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' or 'on a birthday' depending on meaning), verb tense consistency ('went in going abroad' is incorrect; use simple present 'go abroad' for habitual action), and verb form ('bringing' should be 'bring'). Also omit redundant 'my' before 'family' and add 'to' after 'give'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, pluralize 'birthdays' or use 'on a birthday', and maintain correct verb forms.

× I always consider my friends and family's needs and preferences and because of I am a student I usually consider the prices too, but I never.

✓ I always consider my friends' and family's needs and preferences, and because I am a student I usually consider the prices too, but I never buy very expensive gifts.

Sentence incomplete ('but I never.'), incorrect phrase 'because of I am a student' should be 'because I am a student'. Also possessive for 'friends' should be 'friends'' and add a clear finish to the contrast. Suggestion: complete the sentence and use correct conjunction and possessive forms.

× Yes, when I was a child I always writing some letters to my family and my friends and I would also make little characters that being made made by paper so they could.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I always wrote letters to my family and friends and I would also make little paper characters for them.

Incorrect verb forms: 'always writing' should be past simple 'always wrote' for habitual past, 'being made made by paper' is ungrammatical—use 'paper characters' or 'figures made of paper'. The clause 'so they could' is incomplete; use 'for them'. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits and concise noun phrases like 'paper characters'.

× I think it depends on the people. For example, my best friend is not being impressed by expensive gifts, but my another friend is more affected by expensive kids.

✓ I think it depends on the person. For example, my best friend is not impressed by expensive gifts, but another friend is more impressed by expensive gifts.

Errors: 'depends on the people' is better as 'depends on the person' for a general statement. 'is not being impressed' should be simple present passive 'is not impressed'. 'my another friend' is incorrect; use 'another friend'. 'expensive kids' is a wrong word; should be 'expensive gifts'. Suggestion: use simple present for states and correct noun choice.