Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接、简洁并有逻辑。开头给出明确主题句（如“Yes, I’m good at choosing gifts”），随后用1–2个具体理由或例子支持，使用连接词（for example, because）使句子连贯，避免重复与语法错误。注意词序与动词形式，如“figure out what they like”而不是“what kind of gifts they are more interested”。

예시: Yes, I’m quite good at giving gifts because I try to find out what the person likes. For example, I ask about their hobbies or pay attention to what they enjoy, so I can choose something meaningful for them.

제안: 回答应更简洁并用具体细节。先直接说时间（e.g. on birthdays and festivals），然后用连接词补充细节（for example, at Christmas I exchange presents）。避免模糊词汇和冗余，如“something with gifts”。可给出一两个具体礼物例子和原因。

예시: I usually give gifts on birthdays and at festivals such as Chinese New Year and Christmas. For example, at Christmas my family and I exchange presents, while for birthdays I often give gift cards or small personal items so the recipient feels happy.

제안: 内容要明确且逻辑清晰。先给出主题句（e.g. I consider usefulness and price），然后用连接词说明原因并举例。避免重复和不恰当用词（如“confusing”）。谈“price”时说明如何权衡（budget vs meaning）。

예시: When choosing a gift I consider its usefulness and my budget. Price matters because I don’t want to spend beyond my means, but I also try to pick something thoughtful—for example, a useful book or a nice mug that suits the person.

제안: 回答要简洁并使用正确词汇（不要用“roast”）。直接回答是否做过，然后说明一种具体手工礼物及其意义，使用连接词（for example, because）并控制在最多5句内。

예시: Yes, I have. For example, I once made a handmade card for a friend’s birthday because I wanted to show my gratitude. A personal card felt more meaningful than a store-bought present and helped strengthen our friendship.

제안: 回答要更流畅并注意语法。先给明确立场（No），然后用1–2条清晰理由支持，使用连接词（because, for example）并举例说明为什么态度比价格重要。避免重复和语法错误（e.g. “whether”而非 “weather”）。

예시: No, I don’t think expensive gifts express feelings better. What matters is the thought behind the gift; a small, thoughtful present can be more touching than an expensive item because it shows the giver understands you.

× I would like to discover those people, they're interesting or favorable things that they want to have some what kind of gifts so that I can more easily to figure out what gifts they are more interested and more feel like grateful for them to have this.

✓ I try to find out what kinds of things the people I know are interested in or would like, so I can more easily figure out which gifts they would appreciate.

句子结构混乱，包含多处冗余和不正确的表达（like to discover those people, they're interesting or favorable things, what kind of gifts, more feel like grateful）。建议把意思拆成更简单的短语：先说明目的（找出他们的兴趣或喜好），再说明结果（更容易知道他们会喜欢哪些礼物）。简化句子并按英语正常语序排列。

× MMM normally I give gifts to others in their birthdays or some festivals like Chinese New Year or Christmas.

✓ Normally I give gifts to others on their birthdays or at festivals like Chinese New Year or Christmas.

介词使用和时态相关搭配问题：英语中说“on someone's birthday”和“at/for festivals”。原句用“in their birthdays”不正确。改为一般现在时的正确介词搭配以表达习惯性动作。

× We will exchange gifts in Christmas and I will probably give some gifts like gift card or something with gifts in their birthday so that they can be more grateful and cheerful.

✓ We exchange gifts at Christmas, and I will probably give something like a gift card for their birthday so that they will feel grateful and cheerful.

需要使用正确冠词和介词：说节日时用“at Christmas”；“gift card”前应加不定冠词“a”；“in their birthday”应为“for/on their birthday”。另外将时态改为一般现在以符合习惯性动作。最后“so that they can be more grateful and cheerful”更自然为“so that they will feel grateful and cheerful”。

× Obviously the most significant thing that we need to consider about is the price, because I think the price is the most confusing because it also always determine a a gift or something else.

✓ Obviously the most significant thing we need to consider is the price, because I think the price is important and it also always determines whether something is a suitable gift.

原句有时态和动词形式错误：“determine”在主语为“the price”时需三单形式“determines”。句子也冗长重复（most significant... consider about；most confusing）。改为简洁表达并修正动词三单形式。

× We need to determine the price whether it is wealth or not and it is effective.

✓ We need to decide on a price and consider whether it fits the person's means and whether it's appropriate.

句子逻辑和结构混乱，不自然的词汇（wealth, effective）使用不当。将“determine the price whether it is wealth or not”改为更清晰的“decide on a price and consider whether it fits the person's means”，并把“effective”换成更合适的“appropriate”。

× Absolutely yes, because sometimes I will roast some gift card to others in their birthday because I think this card can present my feelings of grateful for them and very is also the way do that we establish a good relationships in the long term.

✓ Absolutely yes, because sometimes I will make or prepare a handmade gift for someone on their birthday. I think this can show my gratitude and also help us build a good long-term relationship.

原句使用了错误的动词“roast”并且情态和结构混乱（will roast some gift card to others）。应使用适当的表述“make/prepare a handmade gift”。“present my feelings of grateful for them”语法错误且不地道，改为“show my gratitude”。最后调整句子顺序使逻辑清晰。

× I will probably give some gifts like gift card or something with gifts in their birthday so that they can be more grateful and cheerful.

✓ I will probably give something like a gift card for their birthday so that they will feel grateful and cheerful.

介词使用不当：“in their birthday”应为“for/on their birthday”；“give ... with gifts”表达不正确，简化为“give something like a gift card”。已修正为正确的介词和更自然的表达。

× It also can express my grateful feelings because I've I mean the price of the products is not the thing you need to consider about is the attitude that people give the gifts to you.

✓ It can also express my gratitude, because I think the price of a gift is not what matters — it's the giver's attitude that counts.

形容词/副词和句子结构使用不当：“express my grateful feelings”可改为“express my gratitude”；冗余短语“I've I mean”应删除；“not the thing you need to consider about is the attitude”语序错误且多余。将句子简化并使用更自然的名词短语和从句。

× It also always determine a a gift or something else.

✓ It also always determines whether something is a suitable gift.

主语为单数“it”或“the price”时，动词需用第三人称单数形式“determines”。原句动词为不带-s的形式。此外补充“whether”引导的宾语从句使句子完整。