Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，导致内容难以理解。建议你使用完整的句子，直接回答问题，并提供具体的细节支持。同时，避免使用不正确的词汇和拼写错误。

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from others, usually from close friends or family members. For example, when I faced urgent medical expenses, I asked them for financial help to cover the costs.

제안: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和完整的句子，表达不清楚。建议你直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并提供具体的细节说明借钱的原因和感受。

예시: Yes, I have lent money to a friend who needed help with medical expenses. I gave them some money to ease their financial burden because I trust them and wanted to support them.

× Yeah, the hellborn money from others.

✓ Yeah, I have borrowed money from others.

原句结构混乱，'the hellborn money'无意义，缺少主语和谓语。应补充主语'I'和谓语'have borrowed'，使句子完整通顺。

× Alfille occasions your way from close friends or family member members.

✓ On all occasions, I borrow money from close friends or family members.

原句中'family member members'重复且单复数错误，应改为'family members'。另外，句子结构不完整，需补充主语和谓语。

× For example, when I faced. Expenses. Such as urgent medical bills. I will power.

✓ For example, when I face expenses such as urgent medical bills, I will borrow money.

原句断句错误，句子不连贯，缺少谓语。应将断句合并，使用正确时态和动词，表达完整意思。

× Yes. Where is your friend? Needed help. Covering. And stated medical. Expenses so and then the some money to earn their burden.

✓ Yes, when my friend needed help covering urgent medical expenses, I lent them some money to ease their burden.

原句断句混乱，语序错误，缺少连贯性。应合并句子，调整语序，使用正确时态和词汇，使句子通顺。

× I believe Monday morning 10 straight then trust.

✓ I believe in trust and helping others sincerely.

原句中'Monday morning 10 straight then trust'无意义，代词和表达错误。应使用正确的代词和表达方式，清晰表达意思。