Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل لتكون أكثر وضوحًا وطبيعية، وركز على استخدام الأزمنة الصحيحة وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية. كما يُفضل أن تضيف تفاصيل أكثر لدعم إجابتك بشكل منطقي ومتسلسل.

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from my parents and my sister before, and I always make sure to pay them back on time.

제안: حاول استخدام كلمات أكثر دقة وصحيحة نحويًا، واهتم بترتيب الجمل واستخدام الروابط بين الأفكار لجعل الإجابة أكثر تماسكًا ووضوحًا.

예시: Yes, I have lent money to my sister and close friends because I believe it's important to support loved ones in times of need.

× Yes, I have her borrow money from my parents or my sister.

✓ Yes, I have borrowed money from my parents or my sister.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is the past participle 'borrowed' to indicate the action completed in the past. The sentence should use 'borrowed' to match the present perfect tense 'have borrowed'.

× And I give it to back every time.

✓ And I give it back every time.

The phrase 'give it to back' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'give it back' without the preposition 'to'. 'Give back' is a phrasal verb meaning to return something.

× Yes, I have led to money for my sister and close friend.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to my sister and close friend.

The verb 'led' is incorrect here; the correct past participle of 'lend' is 'lent'. Since the sentence uses present perfect tense 'have lent', the past participle form 'lent' should be used.

× It's my responsibility as I close one to them.

✓ It's my responsibility as I am close to them.

The phrase 'I close one to them' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I am close to them' to indicate a close relationship. 'Close one' is not appropriate here.