Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有點斷斷續續，句子不完整，建議你在回答時使用完整句子並且避免重複，讓回答更自然流暢。例如，可以先直接回答問題，再用一兩句話解釋原因，並使用連接詞使句子更連貫。

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money a few times, but I always make sure I have enough money in my wallet to avoid borrowing. I think borrowing money can be risky because it might cause misunderstandings, and I don't like to bother others.

제안: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和不完整的句子，建議你在回答時注意語法正確，並且使用連接詞來使句子更流暢。此外，提供更具體的細節會讓回答更豐富。

예시: Yes, I have lent money to others before. However, I usually only lend small amounts because I want to avoid financial problems or misunderstandings, especially with friends. For example, I once lent a friend some money to help with transportation costs.

× I did a few times but I always. Make sure my pocket or wallet. Got enough money to buy this stuff but.

✓ I have borrowed money a few times, but I always make sure my pocket or wallet has enough money to buy things.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'I did a few times' is incomplete; it should be 'I have borrowed money a few times' to match the present perfect tense used in the question. Also, 'Make sure my pocket or wallet. Got enough money' are sentence fragments and need to be combined into a complete sentence with proper subject and verb agreement.

× I think borrowing money from others is risky and I hate to bother someone.

✓ I think borrowing money from others is risky, and I hate to bother anyone.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'someone' is less appropriate here; 'anyone' fits better in negative contexts. Also, adding a comma before 'and' improves readability.

× Yes, I have that money to others before, however I usually only then the small amount because I want to avoid any financial problems or misunderstandings, especially in friendship.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others before; however, I usually only lend a small amount because I want to avoid any financial problems or misunderstandings, especially in friendships.

The original sentence has several errors: 'I have that money to others' should be 'I have lent money to others' to use the correct verb. 'Then the small amount' is incorrect; it should be 'lend a small amount.' Also, 'in friendship' should be pluralized to 'in friendships' to generalize the context. Punctuation is improved by using a semicolon before 'however' and commas after it.

× French for example, I was doing a friend a little money to help with transportation costs.

✓ For example, I lent a friend a little money to help with transportation costs.

The sentence is confusing and incorrectly structured. 'French for example' is unclear and likely a typo or mishearing. The correct phrase is 'For example.' 'I was doing a friend a little money' is incorrect; it should be 'I lent a friend a little money.' This correction clarifies the meaning and corrects verb usage.