Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, with a topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money before. For example, when I was studying at university, our student club organized an event and all members had to contribute money. I didn't have enough funds at that time, so I borrowed some money from a friend to participate in the event.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and making the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use appropriate verb tenses.

예시: Yes, I have lent money to others. For instance, when I was traveling with a friend, he forgot his wallet at home and didn't have enough money to buy a metro ticket. Therefore, I paid for his ticket to help him out.

× Yes, so when I was in a strength and we're studying in a university and the end our call is organized event in a call in a university and all the restaurant have to contribute something on this event.

✓ Yes, so when I was in a strength and we were studying at a university and at the end our class organized an event at the university and all the restaurants had to contribute something to this event.

The sentence contains pluralization errors such as 'restaurant' instead of 'restaurants' and verb agreement errors like 'have' instead of 'had'. Also, 'we're' should be 'we were' to match past tense. Correct plural forms and verb agreements are necessary for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× So I have not I don't have enough money for the event for this and I borrow some money from my.

✓ So I did not have enough money for the event, so I borrowed some money from my friend.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present and past tenses and omits modal verb usage. 'Have not' and 'don't have' are present tense, but the context requires past tense 'did not have'. Also, 'borrow' should be in past tense 'borrowed'. Modal verbs and verb tenses must be consistent to convey the correct time frame.

× Yes, so when when I was traveling with my friend and when we reach to the metro stations and he forgot his wallet in home and he don't have enough money to buy the ticket.

✓ Yes, so when I was traveling with my friend and when we reached the metro station, he forgot his wallet at home and he didn't have enough money to buy the ticket.

The verbs 'reach' and 'don't have' are incorrectly used in present tense; they should be in past tense 'reached' and 'didn't have' to match the past narrative. Also, 'in home' should be 'at home'. Consistent past tense usage is essential for clear storytelling.

× So I pay something to him to buy his ticket.

✓ So I paid him some money to buy his ticket.

The verb 'pay' is incorrectly in present tense; it should be past tense 'paid' to match the past context. Also, 'pay something to him' is awkward; 'paid him some money' is more natural. Correct verb tense and natural phrasing improve clarity.