Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，缺乏完整的句子结构。建议直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复和无关内容。

예시: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I usually manage my expenses carefully and save enough money for my needs.

제안: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不清楚，缺少连贯性。建议用完整的句子描述具体情况，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, when I was in elementary school, I lent some money to my friends so that we could buy snacks together.

× No, because. I think I have how much money I spent? How much money?

✓ No, because I think about how much money I have spent.

原句句子结构混乱，断句不当，导致表达不清晰。应将断句合并，形成完整句子，表达“我考虑我花了多少钱”。

× Yes, when I. Elementary school I don't have the money to buy the snake, so I'm very some. Money with my friends into by the snake.

✓ Yes, when I was in elementary school, I didn't have the money to buy the snack, so I borrowed some money from my friends to buy the snack.

原句时态使用错误，应该用过去时描述过去的事情；另外句子结构混乱，缺少连词和介词，导致表达不完整。应使用过去时态动词，并补充缺失的词语，使句子完整通顺。