Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh các câu không hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ lý do mượn tiền và hoàn chỉnh câu để tránh gây khó hiểu.

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from others, usually from my sister. Since I am a student, I don't always have enough money to buy everything I need. For example, when I hang out with my friends, I sometimes borrow money from her to pay for expenses.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách đầy đủ và rõ ràng hơn, tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng và thiếu ý. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể sẽ giúp câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Definitely yes, I often lend money to my friends when they don't have enough. For instance, during single trips, we usually lend money to each other and pay back later.

× Honestly, I usually borrow money for my sister because.

✓ Honestly, I usually borrow money for my sister because I am a student.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly after 'because'. It needs a complete clause to explain the reason. Adding 'I am a student' completes the sentence logically.

× I don't have enough money to buy everything I want for assemble.

✓ I don't have enough money to buy everything I want for assembly.

The word 'assemble' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'assembly' which refers to a gathering or event. Using the correct noun improves clarity.

× When I hang out with my friend I don't have enough money so I need to borrow from her to pay for.

✓ When I hang out with my friends, I don't have enough money so I need to borrow from them to pay for things.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the plural pronouns 'them'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'things' clarifies what is being paid for.

× Definitely yes. I usually lend money to my friends because of.

✓ Definitely yes. I usually lend money to my friends because of our friendship.

The phrase 'because of' is incomplete and requires an object or reason. Adding 'our friendship' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× When we don't have enough money.

✓ When we don't have enough money,

This is a dependent clause and cannot stand alone as a sentence. It needs to be connected to an independent clause to form a complete sentence.

× Ingle trip are we usually lend money to each other too.

✓ On single trips, we usually lend money to each other too.

'Ingle trip are' is incorrect. It should be 'On single trips' to indicate the time frame. Also, 'lend' should be 'lend' as the subject is plural 'we'.

× And we will give back when we.

✓ And we will give it back when we can.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'it back when we can' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.