Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit too long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid filler phrases like 'you know'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from a few people. However, it was a difficult experience because I couldn't repay them on time, which caused some tension between us.

제안: Your response is understandable but contains some redundancy and informal expressions like 'you know' and 'kind of'. To improve, provide a clear topic sentence, use linking words to connect ideas, and give specific details without repetition.

예시: Yes, I have lent money to some friends. For instance, one friend was unable to repay the full amount, which forced me to remind him several times. This experience made me realize how important honesty is in financial matters.

× They got to, you know, insult me and so on.

✓ They insulted me, you know, and so on.

The phrase 'got to insult me' is incorrect because 'get to' implies permission or opportunity, which does not fit the context here. The correct form is simply 'They insulted me' to indicate the action that happened.

× I had to follow him up.

✓ I had to follow up with him.

The phrase 'follow him up' is incorrect. The correct phrasal verb is 'follow up with someone' meaning to check or pursue something with that person. Using 'follow up with him' is the proper prepositional phrase.