Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子结构混乱，且部分词汇使用不当。建议你在回答时注意句子完整性，避免重复和不连贯的表达，同时使用更准确的词汇。可以先用一句话直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明借钱的原因。

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends before. For example, when I faced financial difficulties and couldn't afford basic needs like food, I asked them for help. They were very supportive and lent me money without hesitation.

제안: 你的回答缺乏连贯性，语法错误较多，且表达不够清晰。建议你在回答时先明确回答问题，然后用一两句具体描述借钱的情境，注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用。使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I have lent money to my friends before. For instance, one of my friends wanted to travel with her friends but didn't have enough money. So, I lent her some money, and she thanked me afterwards.

× Yes, I have borrowed some money from my friends when I saw our big problem in my life.

✓ Yes, I borrowed some money from my friends when I saw a big problem in my life.

这里使用了现在完成时（have borrowed）和过去时间状语（when I saw），时态不一致。应使用一般过去时borrowed来表达过去发生的动作。

× Yeah, I got sucked.

✓ Yeah, I got stuck.

原句中的'sucked'是错误的单词，正确表达应为'got stuck'，表示陷入困境。

× When I have no money to buy some food for myself or I just want to prepare money for my computers, I will buy the money from other.

✓ When I have no money to buy some food for myself or I just want to save money for my computer, I will borrow money from others.

原句中'prepare money for my computers'表达不准确，应为'save money for my computer'。另外，'buy the money from other'用词错误，应为'borrow money from others'。

× So I just remember the sometimes my friends was faced with a big problem.

✓ So I just remember sometimes my friend was faced with a big problem.

'friends'复数与后文单数动词'was'不匹配，应改为单数'friend'。

× He want to travel with her friends, but he don't have enough money.

✓ He wanted to travel with his friends, but he didn't have enough money.

主语he为第三人称单数，动词应使用过去式wanted和didn't have。'her friends'应为'his friends'，代词错误。

× And he lend some money from me and he says thank you afterwards.

✓ And he borrowed some money from me and he said thank you afterwards.

'lend'应使用过去式'borrowed'，因为是他从我这里借钱。'says'应改为过去式'said'，时态保持一致。