Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构不完整，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达方式，并且增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I have. Just last week, I was eager to buy a computer, but it was very expensive and I couldn't afford it at that time. Therefore, I borrowed some money from my parents and promised to pay them back soon.

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，句子不连贯，信息表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础，使用正确的词汇，并用连接词组织句子，使表达更清楚。

예시: Yes, I have. I lent about CN¥2000 to my best friend because she was going through a difficult time. She had an accident and was hospitalized, which required a lot of money for treatment.

× Just last week I particularly eager to buy a computer which was really so expensive.

✓ Just last week, I was particularly eager to buy a computer which was really expensive.

句子缺少谓语动词“was”，导致句子结构不完整。应在主语“I”后加上“was”来构成完整的谓语。

× I can't afford it during that time.

✓ I couldn't afford it during that time.

句子描述的是过去的情况，情态动词“can”应使用过去式“could”以符合时态。

× I promised that I will give them.

✓ I promised that I would give it to them.

在过去时态的主句中，表示将来的从句应使用“would”而非“will”，且“give them”应明确宾语为“it”。

× I remember that I learnt about CN¥2000 to my best friend because she made some difficulties in her life.

✓ I remember that I lent about CN¥2000 to my best friend because she had some difficulties in her life.

“learnt”用错，应为“lent”（借出）；“made some difficulties”表达不当，应为“had some difficulties”表示经历困难。

× She sinked and she went to the hospital.

✓ She sank and she went to the hospital.

动词“sink”的过去式是“sank”，不是“sinked”。

× Is really need a lot of money.

✓ She really needed a lot of money.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且时态应为过去时，需补充主语“she”和谓语“needed”。