Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบของคุณยังไม่ชัดเจนและมีความซ้ำซ้อน ควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเรียบง่าย พร้อมให้รายละเอียดที่เกี่ยวข้องอย่างมีเหตุผลและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

예시: No, I have never borrowed money from others. Instead, I manage my finances by transferring money between my own bank accounts for daily expenses and emergencies.

제안: คำตอบของคุณดีที่ให้เหตุผล แต่ควรปรับปรุงให้ประโยคมีความชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น

예시: No, I haven't lent money to others because I recently graduated and have been working for only two years. Therefore, I need to save my salary for my own expenses.

× No I haven't, I just borrow my money from other bank accounts when I separate my money for a day and emergency cases and then when it happens I just borrow mine from others accounts.

✓ No, I haven't. I just borrow money from other bank accounts when I separate my money for a day and for emergency cases, and then when it happens, I just borrow mine from other accounts.

The original sentence has issues with verb forms and sentence structure. The phrase 'I just borrow' is correct in present tense, but the sentence lacks commas and proper conjunctions to separate ideas clearly. Also, 'others accounts' should be 'other accounts' because 'other' is the correct adjective here. Adding commas and conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No I haven't. I just graduated and got work and have my own salary for two years so I don't have much money to give someone for lending because I have to spare for myself.

✓ No, I haven't. I just graduated and got a job and have had my own salary for two years, so I don't have much money to lend to someone because I have to save for myself.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and word choice issues. 'Got work' should be 'got a job' for clarity. 'Have my own salary for two years' should be 'have had my own salary for two years' to indicate the duration up to now. 'Give someone for lending' is incorrect; it should be 'lend to someone'. 'Spare for myself' is better expressed as 'save for myself'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.