Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you could say: "I usually avoid borrowing money from others because it can affect our relationship. Moreover, I prefer to manage my finances responsibly."

예시: I usually avoid borrowing money from others because it can affect our relationship. Moreover, I prefer to manage my finances responsibly to avoid such situations.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Use correct verb forms and sentence structure. Also, try to be more specific and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you could say: "Recently, I lent some money to a colleague who was facing financial difficulties because her car broke down and she had payment issues. However, I regret it now because it has affected our relationship."

예시: Recently, I lent some money to a colleague who was facing financial difficulties because her car broke down and she had payment issues. However, I regret it now because it has affected our relationship.

× Recently I have lented one of my colleagues at some because she was in financial trouble due to her car breaking down as well as the payment issue that she has and I deeply regret doing so because it alter the relationship that we share and now.

✓ Recently I have lent some money to one of my colleagues because she was in financial trouble due to her car breaking down as well as the payment issues that she has, and I deeply regret doing so because it alters the relationship that we share now.

The verb 'lented' is incorrect; the past participle of 'lend' is 'lent'. Also, 'at some' is incorrect and should be 'some money'. The verb 'alter' should be 'alters' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. These corrections ensure proper past tense usage and subject-verb agreement.