Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达了观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构有些混乱，且部分表达不够准确。建议简化句子，避免冗余，使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法和搭配。

예시: No, I have never borrowed money from friends or family. I feel that borrowing creates a heavy burden, so I prefer to find other ways to raise money, like working extra hours or saving more.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不完整且逻辑不连贯。建议加强语法基础，使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, a few years ago I lent money to a friend, but unfortunately, I never got it back. I felt disappointed because I trusted him. However, this experience taught me to be more careful when lending money in the future.

× No, I have never borrowed money from other people, such as friends, family members and something like that.

✓ No, I have never borrowed money from other people, such as friends, family members and things like that.

这里的'something like that'用法不当，应该用复数形式'things like that'，因为前面列举的是复数名词，保持一致性。

× borrowing the money often gave me a sense of the debt that put in huge burden on my shoulders.

✓ borrowing money often gave me a sense of debt that put a huge burden on my shoulders.

'put in huge burden'中的'put in'用法错误，正确表达是'put a huge burden'，表示'造成沉重负担'。此外，'the money'和'the debt'前的定冠词不必要，应去掉。

× So I often think about how to raise money from the market.

✓ So I often think about how to raise money in the market.

'raise money from the market'中的'from'用法不当，正确介词是'in the market'，表示在市场中筹集资金。

× Yes, few years ago I learned some money to my friends, but fortunately I never got back that the borrowing money.

✓ Yes, a few years ago I lent some money to my friends, but unfortunately I never got back the borrowed money.

'few years ago'前应加冠词'a'，表示'几年前'。'learned'用错，应为'lent'（借出）。'some money'前不加冠词。'got back that the borrowing money'结构错误，应为'got back the borrowed money'。

× Yes, few years ago I learned some money to my friends, but fortunately I never got back that the borrowing money.

✓ Yes, a few years ago I lent some money to my friends, but unfortunately I never got back the borrowed money.

动词时态错误，'learned'应为过去式'lent'，表示过去借出。

× From my perspective that person would be a liar.

✓ From my perspective, that person is a liar.

'would be'表达不确定，语境中应使用现在时'is'，表示对该人的判断。

× So I think that the event would be a social license that give me a chance to learn how to.

✓ So I think that the event would be a social lesson that gives me a chance to learn how to.

'social license'用词不当，应为'social lesson'（社会教训）。'give'应为第三人称单数形式'gives'，因为主语是'social lesson'。句子末尾不完整，应补充完整。