Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“can't afford for”应为“couldn't afford”，“difficulty situations”应为“difficult situations”。建议注意时态一致性和词汇搭配，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from others before. At that time, I was facing financial difficulties and couldn't afford my daily expenses. So, I asked a friend to lend me some money to get through that tough period. Fortunately, he was very kind and helped me.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“they are meeting financial difficulties”应为“they are facing financial difficulties”，以及“without hesitations”应为“without hesitation”。建议简化句子结构，注意语法准确性，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I have lent money to others before because I believe helping each other is very important. If my close friends face financial difficulties, I will support them without hesitation. I think this is a good way to show care and strengthen our friendship.

× At that time, I was facing the financial difficulties and I can't afford for my daily expenses.

✓ At that time, I was facing financial difficulties and I couldn't afford my daily expenses.

句子中描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。'can't'是现在时，应该改为过去时的'couldn't'。此外，'afford for'是不正确的搭配，'afford'后面直接接名词即可。

× So I asked for my friend to lend me some money to deal with the difficulty situations.

✓ So I asked my friend to lend me some money to deal with the difficult situations.

'ask for'通常后接请求的对象或物品，这里应直接用'ask my friend'表示请求朋友帮忙。'difficulty situations'搭配不当，应改为'difficult situations'。

× So if I have some close friends, they are meeting financial difficulties, I will help them and give my support and assistance without hesitations.

✓ So if I have some close friends who are facing financial difficulties, I will help them and give my support and assistance without hesitation.

原句中两个分句之间缺少连接词，应该用'who are'引导定语从句。'without hesitations'中'hesitations'应为不可数名词，改为'single'形式'hestitation'。