Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法错误较多，句子结构不够自然，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends once. At that time, I had a quarrel with my parents, so they refused to support me financially. Therefore, I had to borrow money from my friends to cover my living expenses.

제안: 回答中存在时态错误和表达不清的问题，句子结构较为混乱。建议使用正确的时态，简洁明了地表达事件经过，并使用连接词增强逻辑性。

예시: Yes, I have lent money to a friend before. However, he is no longer my friend because after I lent him the money, he cut off contact and refused to pay me back.

× Yes, I can tell you once I have borrowed money from my friends because at that time I have a quarrel with my parents and they refuse to afford my life.

✓ Yes, I can tell you once I borrowed money from my friends because at that time I had a quarrel with my parents and they refused to afford my life.

这里涉及过去时态的使用。描述过去发生的事情时，应该使用一般过去时，而不是现在完成时。"have borrowed"应改为"borrowed"，"have a quarrel"应改为"had a quarrel"，"refuse"应改为过去式"refused"。这样表达更符合英语时态规则。

× So I have to borrow money from my friends to make a living.

✓ So I had to borrow money from my friends to make a living.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。"have to"表示现在的义务，描述过去的义务应使用过去式"had to"。

× Yes I have. I can tell you once I lend my money to my friends.

✓ Yes, I have. I can tell you once I lent my money to my friend.

这里描述过去发生的动作，应该使用过去时态。"lend"应改为过去式"lent"。另外，"friends"应改为单数"friend"，因为后文指的是具体的一个人。

× But he is not my friend now because when since I lend money to him, he deleted my connection and refused to return the money for me.

✓ But he is not my friend now because since I lent money to him, he deleted my connection and refused to return the money to me.

"when since"用法错误，应只用"since"表示自从。"lend"应改为过去式"lent"。"refused to return the money for me"中"for me"用法不当，应该用"to me"表示归还给某人。