Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. For example, you can say: "Yes, I have borrowed money from others. For instance, once I forgot to bring enough money while buying stationery, so I asked my friend to lend me 50. She kindly gave it to me, and I returned it promptly to maintain her trust."

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from others. For example, once I went to buy stationery but realized I was short of 50. So, I asked my friend to lend me the amount, and she agreed. I made sure to return the money quickly to keep her trust.

제안: Your answer should be clearer and more coherent. Begin with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Also, correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example: "No, I have never lent money to others because I had a bad experience. Once, I lent money to a friend who delayed returning it for several days, which affected my trust. Therefore, I prefer not to lend money now."

예시: No, I have never lent money to others because of a bad experience. For instance, I lent money to a friend who was supposed to return it the next day, but he delayed for almost a week. This made me lose trust, so I avoid lending money now.

× Honestly speaking when I went to at market for buying a stationary I left a short ₹50.

✓ Honestly speaking, when I went to the market to buy stationery, I was short of ₹50.

The phrase 'went to at market' is incorrect; it should be 'went to the market'. Also, 'for buying a stationary' is incorrect; it should be 'to buy stationery'. 'Stationery' refers to writing materials, while 'stationary' means not moving. Additionally, 'I left a short ₹50' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I was short of ₹50'. These corrections improve preposition use and word choice.

× So I asked my ask my friend to give me money.

✓ So I asked my friend to give me money.

The phrase 'asked my ask my friend' contains a repetition error. Removing the repeated 'ask my' corrects the sentence. This is an issue with pronoun and word usage clarity.

× See she she give me money then I also build her trust by returning her money.

✓ She gave me money, then I also built her trust by returning the money.

The verb 'give' should be in past tense 'gave' to agree with the past context. Similarly, 'build' should be 'built'. Also, 'she she' is a repetition error. Correct verb forms and removal of repetition fix the sentence.

× To others, no, I have never let money me know as I didn't have a good experience of that.

✓ To others, no, I have never lent money because I didn't have a good experience with that.

The phrase 'let money me know' is incorrect; it should be 'lent money'. Also, 'experience of that' is better expressed as 'experience with that'. These corrections fix preposition and verb usage.

× For example, I give money to my friend for one day, but he didn't return me for a five or three days, five or six days after.

✓ For example, I gave money to my friend for one day, but he didn't return it for five or six days after.

The verb 'give' should be in past tense 'gave' to match the past context. 'Return me' is incorrect; it should be 'return it'. Also, 'a five or three days' is awkward; 'five or six days' is clearer. These corrections address tense and pronoun use.

× It made a bad image of her in my mind.

✓ It gave me a bad impression of him.

'Made a bad image of her in my mind' is awkward and unclear. The correct expression is 'gave me a bad impression of him' if referring to the male friend. Pronoun 'her' should be 'him' to match 'friend' (male). This correction improves pronoun use and clarity.

× So I declined to let money with let money.

✓ So I declined to lend money.

The phrase 'declined to let money with let money' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'declined to lend money'. This fixes preposition and verb usage errors.