Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“wife faced unexpected expenses”缺少冠词，且句子结构不完整。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from close friends or family members a few times. For instance, when my wife faced unexpected medical bills, I asked for a small loan to help cover the expenses.

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误（ingenious应为genuine）和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构的完整性，避免拼写错误。

예시: Yes, I have lent money to close friends or family members a few times. For example, last year I lent money to a friend who had unexpected medical expenses because I believe in helping others when they are in genuine need.

× For example, wife faced unexpected expenses such as urgent medical bills.

✓ For example, my wife faced unexpected expenses such as urgent medical bills.

句子缺少主语的限定词，导致结构不完整。应在wife前加上my，明确指代，句子结构才完整。

× I ask for a small loan to manage the situation.

✓ I asked for a small loan to manage the situation.

根据上下文，描述的是过去发生的事情，动词时态应为过去式，故将ask改为asked。

× I believe helping other financially when they are ingenious need.

✓ I believe in helping others financially when they are in genuine need.

other应为others表示复数，ingenious用错，正确词为genuine表示真正的，且缺少介词in，句子表达更准确。