Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答较为自然且内容具体，但句子较长且略显复杂，可以适当简化句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。同时，可以增加一些连接词来增强逻辑性。

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from close friends or family a few times. For example, I needed help with urgent medical bills. Usually, I only borrow when it's really necessary.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误（'have lend'应为'have lent'），且表达较为简单，缺少连接词和细节。建议注意时态和语法的正确使用，并丰富内容，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I have lent money to others when they faced urgent situations, such as medical bills. I usually help close friends or family members because I understand their difficulties.

× Yes, I have lend money to others.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others.

这里使用的是现在完成时态，助动词have后面应该接动词的过去分词形式。'lend'的过去分词是'lent'，所以应改为'have lent'。

× When they have some urgent occasions such as medical bills, I will lend money to them.

✓ When they have some urgent occasions such as medical bills, I lend money to them.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时而不是将来时。'will lend'表示将来发生的动作，不符合语境。将'modal verb'的'will'去掉，改为一般现在时'lend'更合适。