Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, use 'borrowed money from my family' instead of 'from others and that is from my family'. Also, avoid redundancy like 'just fell down and got hurt' can be simplified. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from my family. When I was in college, I fell and injured myself, so I asked them to send me some money for my treatment.

제안: Your answer needs grammatical corrections and better linking. Use past tense consistently ('lent' instead of 'lend', 'was in trouble' instead of 'was in a trouble'). Also, avoid repeating 'so' and use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I have lent money to my friend Sabina. She was in trouble because she had to pay her bills on time. Therefore, she called me and told me she needed money immediately, so I sent her the money.

× Yes, I have lend money to my friends.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to my friends.

The verb 'lend' is irregular and its past participle form is 'lent'. Since the sentence uses present perfect tense ('have'), the past participle 'lent' should be used instead of the base form 'lend'. Nepali explanation: 'lend' क्रियाको past participle 'lent' हो। Present perfect tense मा 'have' पछि past participle आउनुपर्छ, त्यसैले 'have lend' होइन 'have lent' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× So I send her the money.

✓ So I sent her the money.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the past tense of the verb 'send' should be used, which is 'sent'. Using 'send' (present tense) is incorrect here. Nepali explanation: यो वाक्यले भूतकालको घटना जनाउँछ, त्यसैले 'send' को past tense 'sent' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ। 'send' present tense हो, जुन यहाँ गलत छ।