Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and incorrect articles like 'a money'. Also, clarify your points with better linking words and more specific details. Try to keep your answer concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, I rarely borrow money from others, but sometimes I ask my brother for help when I need to pay my tuition fees. For example, he once lent me $5000, and he is always willing to support me when I need it.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to explain your reasons clearly. Also, avoid vague phrases and provide specific details to support your answer.

예시: No, I have never lent money to others because I have a limited budget and need to save for my own expenses. For instance, when someone asked me to lend $1000, I couldn't afford to help them.

× Yes, I seldom borrow a money from others but I sometimes borrow money from my brothers when I need to be pay my dollars fees.

✓ Yes, I seldom borrow money from others but I sometimes borrow money from my brothers when I need to pay my dollar fees.

The word 'money' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'need to be pay' is incorrect; it should be 'need to pay' because 'need to' is followed by the base form of the verb.

× Yes, I seldom borrow a money from others but I sometimes borrow money from my brothers when I need to be pay my dollars fees.

✓ Yes, I seldom borrow money from others but I sometimes borrow money from my brothers when I need to pay my dollar fees.

The phrase 'need to be pay' is grammatically incorrect. After 'need to', the base form of the verb should be used, so it should be 'need to pay'.

× Yes, I seldom borrow a money from others but I sometimes borrow money from my brothers when I need to be pay my dollars fees.

✓ Yes, I seldom borrow money from others but I sometimes borrow money from my brothers when I need to pay my dollar fees.

The word 'dollars fees' is incorrect because 'fees' is plural but 'dollars' should be singular as an adjective modifying 'fees'. The correct form is 'dollar fees'. Alternatively, 'fees in dollars' could be used.

× That time I got the $5000 from my brothers and he he's always ready to help me.

✓ That time I got $5000 from my brothers and they are always ready to help me.

The pronoun 'he' is singular but 'brothers' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they'. Also, 'he he's' is redundant and incorrect.

× That time I got the $5000 from my brothers and he he's always ready to help me.

✓ That time I got $5000 from my brothers and they are always ready to help me.

The pronoun 'he' does not agree with the plural noun 'brothers'. The correct pronoun is 'they'. Also, 'he he's' is a repetition and should be corrected.

× No, I never gave him money to anyone's because I have some small amount of money and I can use for my own purpose and someone asked me for a big amount like 1000 I can't give it to anyone.

✓ No, I have never given money to anyone because I have a small amount of money that I can use for my own purposes, and if someone asks me for a big amount like 1000, I can't give it to anyone.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrectly used and unnecessary here. The phrase 'gave him money to anyone's' is incorrect. The correct form is 'given money to anyone'. Also, 'anyone's' is incorrect; it should be 'anyone'. The verb tense should be present perfect 'have never given' to match the question's tense.

× No, I never gave him money to anyone's because I have some small amount of money and I can use for my own purpose and someone asked me for a big amount like 1000 I can't give it to anyone.

✓ No, I have never given money to anyone because I have a small amount of money that I can use for my own purposes, and if someone asks me for a big amount like 1000, I can't give it to anyone.

The verb 'gave' is simple past tense, but the question asks about experience, so present perfect 'have never given' is more appropriate.

× No, I never gave him money to anyone's because I have some small amount of money and I can use for my own purpose and someone asked me for a big amount like 1000 I can't give it to anyone.

✓ No, I have never given money to anyone because I have a small amount of money that I can use for my own purposes, and if someone asks me for a big amount like 1000, I can't give it to anyone.

The preposition 'to' after 'gave him money' is incorrect in this context. The correct phrase is 'given money to anyone'. Also, 'use for my own purpose' should be 'use for my own purposes' to be idiomatic.