Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'a significant money' and 'tuition's fee'. Also, the sentence is a bit long and could be split for clarity. Try to use correct articles and possessive forms, and keep sentences concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I have. When I was a student, I borrowed a significant amount of money from my parents to pay my tuition fees. I repaid it promptly to maintain a good relationship and keep their trust.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear references, such as 'he was behind his debt for his for her mortgage' and inconsistent pronouns. Also, the answer is incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to use clear subject references, correct verb tenses, and complete your thoughts with linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I have. Two years ago, I lent a significant amount of money to my sister when she was struggling to pay her mortgage debt. I was glad to help her because I believe people should support each other in difficult times.

× I borrowed a significant money from my parents to pay my tuition's fee and I repaid it promptly to have good relationship with them and maintain the trust.

✓ I borrowed a significant amount of money from my parents to pay my tuition fee and I repaid it promptly to have a good relationship with them and maintain their trust.

The word 'money' is an uncountable noun and cannot be used with 'a significant' directly. Instead, 'a significant amount of money' is correct. Also, 'tuition's fee' is incorrect; it should be 'tuition fee' without the possessive. Additionally, 'good relationship' needs the article 'a' and 'maintain the trust' should be 'maintain their trust' to specify whose trust is meant.

× I could lend a significant money to my sisters two years ago when he was behind his debt for his for her mortgage.

✓ I could lend a significant amount of money to my sisters two years ago when they were behind on their debt for their mortgage.

The pronouns 'he' and 'his' are incorrectly used when referring to 'my sisters' which is plural; the correct pronouns are 'they' and 'their'. Also, 'a significant money' should be 'a significant amount of money' as 'money' is uncountable.

× I could lend a significant money to my sisters two years ago when he was behind his debt for his for her mortgage.

✓ I could lend a significant amount of money to my sisters two years ago when they were behind on their debt for their mortgage.

As before, 'a significant money' is incorrect; it should be 'a significant amount of money' because 'money' is uncountable.

× I could lend a significant money to my sisters two years ago when he was behind his debt for his for her mortgage.

✓ I could lend a significant amount of money to my sisters two years ago when they were behind on their debt for their mortgage.

The phrase 'behind his debt' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'behind on their debt' to indicate being late in payment.

× I could help him to pay his debt.

✓ I could help them to pay their debt.

The pronouns 'him' and 'his' do not agree with the plural subject 'my sisters'. They should be 'them' and 'their' respectively to maintain agreement.

× And I think people can help others when they are in.

✓ And I think people can help others when they are in need.

The sentence is incomplete; 'when they are in' requires an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'need' completes the sentence logically.