Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些冗长且结构不够清晰，建议直接回答问题后，用简洁的句子补充细节，避免语法错误，如“preserve build relationships”应为“preserve relationships”。

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from close friends and family a few times, especially during emergencies like medical bills. I always make sure to repay them promptly to maintain trust and good relationships.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“I usually do close friends and family members”和“it's important to be occasions to avoid”。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和表达清晰。

예시: Yes, I have lent money to close friends and family members a few times. For instance, I once lent money to a friend who had unexpected expenses. I believe lending money can strengthen trust, but it's important to be careful about when to lend.

× If I have borrowed money from close friends and family on a few occasions, especially when I encounter financial difficulties such as urgent medical bills, I would make sure to repay the money promptly to maintain trust and preserve build relationships.

✓ I have borrowed money from close friends and family on a few occasions, especially when I encountered financial difficulties such as urgent medical bills. I made sure to repay the money promptly to maintain trust and preserve relationships.

句子中使用了条件句“if”，但表达的意思是过去发生的事实，应该使用陈述句。动词时态需要与过去事实一致，故将“encounter”改为过去式“encountered”，将“would make sure”改为过去式“made sure”。“preserve build relationships”中“build”多余，应删除。

× I usually do close friends and family members.

✓ I usually do so for close friends and family members.

句子缺少宾语，导致表达不完整。应补充“so”指代前文动作，且加上介词“for”表示对象。

× For example, I once lend some money to a friend who needed help covering unexpected expenses.

✓ For example, I once lent some money to a friend who needed help covering unexpected expenses.

“once”表示过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式，“lend”应改为“lent”。

× but it's important to be occasions to avoid.

✓ but it's important to avoid such occasions.

句子结构混乱，语序错误。应调整为“avoid such occasions”表达避免此类情况的意思。