Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct verb forms and combine your ideas into coherent sentences. Also, avoid short, fragmented sentences and provide clearer reasons with linking words.

예시: No, I haven't borrowed money from others yet because I manage my finances carefully. I believe money should only be used for emergencies, so I try to control my spending.

제안: Use correct verb forms and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, explain your reasons more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: No, I haven't lent money to others because I find it difficult and uncomfortable if they don't pay me back. Instead, I prefer to give them advice to help with their problems.

× No, I haven't borrow money from others yet.

✓ No, I haven't borrowed money from others yet.

The verb 'borrow' should be in the past participle form 'borrowed' after 'haven't' to correctly form the present perfect tense.

× I manage my financial.

✓ I manage my finances.

The word 'financial' is an adjective and cannot stand alone as a noun. The correct noun is 'finances' to refer to money matters.

× And control.

✓ And control it.

The sentence fragment 'And control.' lacks an object. Adding 'it' clarifies what is being controlled, making the sentence complete.

× Because I think money should use in some emergency issues.

✓ Because I think money should be used in some emergency situations.

The verb 'use' needs to be in passive form 'be used' and 'emergency issues' is better expressed as 'emergency situations' for natural English.

× No, I haven't lend money to add this yet.

✓ No, I haven't lent money to anyone yet.

The verb 'lend' should be in the past participle form 'lent' after 'haven't' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'to add this' is unclear and replaced with 'to anyone' for clarity.

× I think it is too hard and feel acquired if the person didn't pay back.

✓ I think it is too hard and feels awkward if the person doesn't pay back.

The verb 'feel' should agree with the singular subject 'it' as 'feels'. 'Acquired' is incorrect here; 'awkward' better expresses the intended meaning. Also, 'didn't' is changed to 'doesn't' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I prefer give some advice to them instead of lean money to them.

✓ I prefer to give some advice to them instead of lending money to them.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'give'. Also, 'lean' is a typo and should be 'lend' in the gerund form 'lending' after 'instead of'.