Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but lacks specific details and clarity. Try to directly answer the question first, then provide specific reasons or examples. Avoid vague phrases like 'sharing is caring' which do not directly relate to borrowing money. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I have borrowed money from others several times, especially when I faced unexpected expenses. For example, last year I borrowed some money from a friend to pay for my medical bills.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid repeating previous answers and focus on directly answering the question. Provide specific details and reasons, and complete your sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I have lent money to others several times because I want to help my friends. However, I feel cautious sometimes because I worry they might not pay me back on time.

× Yes, in my earlier answered I mentioned that caring is sharing that's why.

✓ Yes, in my earlier answer, I mentioned that caring is sharing; that's why.

The phrase 'earlier answered' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'earlier answer'. Also, the sentence lacks proper punctuation to separate clauses, which affects clarity. Adding a comma after 'answer' and a semicolon before 'that's why' improves sentence structure and readability.

× I lent money several times to others and sometimes I feel cautious when I give them money but.

✓ I lent money several times to others, and sometimes I feel cautious when I give them money.

The sentence ends with 'but' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. Removing 'but' completes the sentence properly. Also, adding a comma before 'and' separates the two independent clauses correctly.