Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议在回答中使用连接词，并适当扩展细节，使回答更自然且内容丰富。

예시: No, I haven't borrowed money from others because I think it would be an awkward situation if I couldn't return the money on time. Moreover, I prefer to manage my finances carefully to avoid such problems.

제안: 你的回答内容较丰富，但句子连接不够自然，且最后一句不完整。建议使用恰当的连接词，避免句子断裂，并尝试用更准确的词汇表达观点。

예시: No, I haven't lent money to others because I believe it can damage relationships. For example, if people do not return the money promptly, it can cause feelings of anger or anxiety, which may lead to mistrust.

× No, because I believe that lending money to others may cause the damage of a relationship When people do not return your money promptly, you may feel angry or anxious, and then you may think the borrowers are not trustworthy or.

✓ No, because I believe that lending money to others may damage a relationship. When people do not return your money promptly, you may feel angry or anxious, and then you may think the borrowers are not trustworthy.

原句中缺少句号，导致两个句子连在一起，形成了句子结构错误。应在“relationship”后加句号，分开两个完整句子。建议注意句子之间的标点符号，确保句子结构完整。