Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้ tense ที่เหมาะสมและคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงการจัดระเบียบคำตอบให้มีความเชื่อมโยงและกระชับมากขึ้น

예시: Yes, I sometimes borrow money from my friends because I usually use mobile banking for daily purchases. However, some local shops do not accept online payments, so I need to borrow cash from my friends in those cases.

제안: คำตอบนี้มีความไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ ควรปรับปรุงให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และชัดเจน รวมถึงให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมเพื่อทำให้คำตอบน่าสนใจและสมบูรณ์มากขึ้น

예시: Yes, I have lent money to my friends when they faced financial difficulties. For example, once a friend had an unexpected expense, so I helped by lending him some money until he could repay me.

× I sometimes borrow money from my friends because I always use mobile banking to buy thing in daily life.

✓ I sometimes borrow money from my friends because I always use mobile banking to buy things in daily life.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items bought in daily life, indicating a plural noun is needed.

× But some local shop did not accept the online banking so I used to borrow the cash for my friend.

✓ But some local shops did not accept online banking so I used to borrow cash from my friends.

The noun 'shop' should be plural 'shops' to match 'some', 'online banking' does not need 'the', and 'borrow the cash for my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'borrow cash from my friends' to indicate borrowing money from friends.

× Yes I have the money to my friends since sometime they got a trouble with my knee so I can help by lending them.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to my friends since sometimes they have trouble with their knees, so I can help by lending to them.

The phrase 'have the money to my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'have lent money to my friends' to indicate past action. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Got a trouble' should be 'have trouble'. 'My knee' should be 'their knees' to refer to friends' troubles. Also, 'lending them' should be 'lending to them' for correct verb-preposition usage.