Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的语法结构。

예시: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I usually manage my expenses carefully and avoid financial difficulties.

제안: 回答中有很多犹豫词和语法错误，表达不连贯。建议练习流利表达，使用连词使句子更连贯，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, I have lent money to my friends a few times. For example, last week, my friend texted me saying they forgot their wallet at a restaurant and needed some money to pay the bill.

× So far, no, I didn't borrow the money from others because I think if it is not a big difficult I usually can't my Roman borrow the money from.

✓ So far, no, I haven't borrowed money from others because I think if it is not very difficult, I usually can't borrow money from others.

这里的时态错误，题目问的是“Have you ever borrowed...”，应该用现在完成时态，不能用过去式'didn't borrow'。另外，句子中存在语序和表达不清的问题，'my Roman borrow the money from'没有意义，改为'borrow money from others'更合适。建议学习现在完成时的用法和句子结构。

× Yes, I have, but it a small number.

✓ Yes, I have, but it is a small number.

这里缺少动词'is'，导致句子不完整。'it a small number'应为'it is a small number'。这是句子缺少动词的问题，属于句子结构错误。建议注意句子主谓一致和完整性。

× Uh umm, last time my friends, uh, texted me say it's uh, they were in restaurant but they hit card, uh.

✓ Uh, umm, last time my friends texted me saying they were in a restaurant but they forgot their card.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词和正确的表达方式。'texted me say'应为'texted me saying'，'in restaurant'应为'in a restaurant'，'hit card'应为'forgot their card'。建议学习从句和动词-ing形式的用法，以及冠词的使用。