Money— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
수험생
I have a few times. In fact, I mostly borrow money from my older sister. She she always tries to help me with everything I do and whenever I am. Whenever I need some money, whether it's to buy something from the Internet or just buy something in general, I ask her to lend me some money and she gives it to me.
시험관
Have you ever lent money to others?
수험생
Yes I have. I mostly lend money to my friends whenever they need me to lend them money. One of my friend sat man who often struggles financially. He comes up to me and asks me for help and I am glad to help him.
평가
총점
Part 1
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is generally clear but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors, such as repeating 'she' and incomplete sentences. Try to avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.
예시: Yes, I have borrowed money a few times, mostly from my older sister. She always tries to help me whenever I need financial support. For example, if I want to buy something online or need money for daily expenses, I ask her, and she kindly lends it to me.
Have you ever lent money to others?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'One of my friend sat man'. Try to use correct grammar and clarify your points. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating similar phrases. Keep your answer concise and specific.
예시: Yes, I have lent money to my friends when they needed help. For instance, one of my friends often faces financial difficulties, so he asks me for assistance. I am always happy to support him when I can.
문법
× She she always tries to help me with everything I do and whenever I am.
✓ She always tries to help me with everything I do and whenever I am.
The word 'she' is repeated unnecessarily, which is a typographical error and disrupts sentence flow. Removing the repeated word improves clarity.
× She she always tries to help me with everything I do and whenever I am.
✓ She always tries to help me with everything I do and whenever I need help.
The phrase 'whenever I am' is incomplete and unclear. It should be followed by a complement to complete the meaning, such as 'whenever I need help.' This correction improves sentence completeness and clarity.
× One of my friend sat man who often struggles financially.
✓ One of my friends is a man who often struggles financially.
The phrase 'One of my friend sat man' contains multiple errors: 'friend' should be plural 'friends' after 'one of my'; 'sat' is likely a typo or misplaced word; and the sentence lacks a verb linking the subject and complement. Correcting to 'One of my friends is a man' fixes singular/plural agreement and sentence structure.
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