Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语言不够自然，且有些句子结构不完整，影响了表达的流畅性。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达（如“borrow money from others”和“return the money back”重复），并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I borrowed money from others when I bought a new house in 2013. It was difficult to ask for help, and I had to repay the money quickly.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如性别代词错误和句子不完整。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的代词，并避免口语填充词，保持句子简洁明了。

예시: Yes, I lent money to my brother last year when he had financial difficulties. Fortunately, he repaid me very quickly without any interest.

× Yes, I used to borrow money from others when I bought a new house in 2013.

✓ Yes, I borrowed money from others when I bought a new house in 2013.

这里使用“used to borrow”不太合适，因为描述的是过去某个具体时间点发生的动作，应该用一般过去时“borrowed”。“used to”通常表示过去经常做但现在不做的动作。

× And you know what is hard to say and to speak out? To borrow money from others and you need to return the money back immediately.

✓ And you know what is hard to say and to speak out? Borrowing money from others means you need to return the money immediately.

“to borrow money from others and you need to return the money back immediately”结构不清晰，且“return the money back”中“return”已经包含“回”的意思，“back”多余。改为“Borrowing money from others means you need to return the money immediately”更通顺。

× Yes, add lend money to my brother when she had a financial difficulties last year, I think uh, he, he returned the money back very quickly.

✓ Yes, I lent money to my brother when he had financial difficulties last year. I think he returned the money very quickly.

“add lend money”应为“I lent money”；“she”指代错误，应该是“he”指代“my brother”；“a financial difficulties”中“difficulties”是复数，不应加冠词“a”；“returned the money back”中“back”多余。

× So you is mine uh, interest.

✓ So you are my interest.

“you is”主谓不一致，应为“you are”；“mine”用错，应该是形容词性物主代词“my”；句子结构不完整，改为“So you are my interest”更合理。