Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接并且流畅，避免重复和语法错误。开头直接给出肯定或否定的回答（主题句），然后用一两句具体原因支持。可以使用连接词（because, so, therefore）使表达更连贯，并注意时态与代词的一致性。尽量控制在不超过五个句子内。

예시: No, I haven't borrowed money from others. I avoid borrowing because it can complicate relationships and sometimes causes misunderstandings. For example, if someone owes me money, it can create awkwardness and damage a friendship, so I prefer to manage financially on my own.

제안: 回答需更清晰、简洁并纠正句子结构错误。先给出直接回答，再说明具体原因和一两个细节。避免重复提问的片段，使用连接词（because, so, if）提高逻辑性。注意词汇使用（e.g. "spare money"而不是"free money"）和语法（时态、主谓一致）。控制在最多五句。

예시: No, I haven't lent money to others. I usually don't because I don't have much spare money, and I'm concerned people might not be able to pay me back promptly. For instance, a friend once delayed repayment for months, so now I'm more cautious about lending.

× MMM, no, I don't borrow money from others because I don't want to do things. I I think the things were were reduced our relationship and they were damaged our friendship.

✓ No, I don't borrow money from others because I don't want to cause problems. I think giving or asking for money can damage our relationship and friendship.

错误类型：句子结构错误（26）。原句中存在重复词（"I I"、"were were"）、不自然的表达（"I don't want to do things" 与上下文不匹配），以及搭配不当（"reduced our relationship"、"they were damaged our friendship"）。建议：将句子分为两部分，第一部分明确否定并说明原因，使用自然搭配如 "cause problems"；第二部分使用清晰的主语和谓语结构，如 "giving or asking for money can damage our relationship and friendship"，避免被动和冗余。

× Now I don't late morning to Have you ever lent money? Have you ever lent money to others? No, because I'm so poor I have no money, no free money to get some people and they, if they can return quickly.

✓ No, I have never lent money to others because I'm poor and don't have extra money to lend. If someone could return it quickly, I might consider it, but usually I can't.

错误类型：时态与句子结构错误（6 / 26）。原句中出现许多不连贯或无意义的片段（"Now I don't late morning to Have you ever lent money?"），时态和表达不一致（同时有现在和未完成的想法但未表达清楚）。建议：用简洁的现在完成时或现在时表达经历和习惯，例如 "I have never lent money" 表示从过去到现在都没有；用条件句清楚表达假设（"If someone could return it quickly, I might consider it"）。去掉多余或混乱的词语，保证句子通顺。