Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and natural, use correct grammar, and give a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid slang like “nah” and incorrect word order. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I have never borrowed money from anyone because I prefer to manage my expenses myself. For example, I save a small amount each month so I don’t need to rely on others.

제안: Answer clearly, correct tense and grammar, and organize ideas with linking words. State whether you have lent money, give a specific example, and mention the result briefly. Avoid unclear words and fragments.

예시: Yes, I have lent money to friends on several occasions. For instance, last year I lent a friend $50 when he was short on cash, but he was unable to repay me on time, which made me more cautious about lending money in the future.

× Nah, I haven't because I don't like to borrow money from another.

✓ No, I haven't because I don't like to borrow money from others.

The pronoun 'another' is incorrect here; 'another' refers to an additional single item/person. The context needs the plural 'others' to mean other people. Also 'Nah' is informal; 'No' is more appropriate in many contexts.

× It is so embarrassed.

✓ It is so embarrassing.

The speaker used the adjective 'embarrassed' (which describes a person) instead of 'embarrassing' (which describes a situation). The situation of borrowing is 'embarrassing.' Use 'embarrassed' only when describing how a person feels.

× Of course, everyone had lend money to Niger because when they don't have money, they will come to meet up, ask me some money like borrow my money but they never return it back.

✓ Of course, everyone has lent me money because when they don't have money, they come to me and ask to borrow money, but they never return it.

Multiple problems: 'had lend' is incorrect past perfect and incorrect verb form; use present perfect 'has lent' with past participle 'lent'. 'Niger' seems to be a typo for 'me' or a name; corrected to 'me' to fit context. 'Will come to meet up' and 'ask me some money like borrow my money' are awkward and tense-mixed; use simple present 'come' for habitual actions and 'ask to borrow money'. 'Never return it back' is redundant; use 'never return it'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement and proper verb forms.