Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体清晰，直接回应了问题并给出原因和具体例子。但可以改进的地方有：1) 句子有轻微的语法错误或词汇使用不当（例如“asking other”应为“asking others”）。2) 回答略显冗长，可在最多五句内更简洁有力。3) 可用连接词增强连贯性并给出更具体的细节（比如每月存多少或如何管理开支）。建议练习把答案控制在3-4句内，修正小语法，并加入具体数字或方法以增强可信度。

예시: No, I’ve never borrowed money from anyone. I find it a bit embarrassing, and my mother taught me to save, so I set aside about $50 every month to cover my expenses. Because of this habit, I rarely need to ask others for money.

제안: 回答直接且内容完整，说明了原因（学生身份、父母资助）并表达个人倾向。但可以改进：1) 分句之间可用连接词使表达更流畅（例如“because”或“so”）。2) 可加入一两个具体细节或例外情况（如如果情况特殊是否会借）。3) 注意冗长句子拆分以符合自然口语节奏。建议把回答控制在3句内，并补充一个简短的条件句以显示更全面的观点。

예시: No, I’ve never lent money to anyone because I’m a student and my income is limited. My parents support me, so I usually avoid financial dealings with friends. If someone was in a serious emergency, I might consider helping in a small, manageable way.

× For example, I set aside a small amount of money each month so I can cover it myself rather than asking other.

✓ For example, I set aside a small amount of money each month so I can cover it myself rather than asking others.

原句中“asking other”用法不正确。這裡“other”作為代詞應使用複數形式“others”表示“其他人”。建議：當指代“其他人”時使用“others”；如果後面接名詞則用“other people”。

× and I prefer not to get involved into financial matters with friends.

✓ and I prefer not to get involved in financial matters with friends.

原句中搭配錯誤，“get involved”常與介詞“in”連用，而不是“into”。雖然“into”表示動向，但在固定短語“get involved in”中表示“參與於…”，所以應改為“get involved in”。