App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ.

예시: Recently, I have been using Facebook and Zalo quite a lot to keep in touch with my friends and family. Sometimes, I also use YouTube to watch movies and learn new things.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi sai về số nhiều, thì và từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

예시: To be honest, I'm really interested in educational and entertainment apps. For example, I often use language learning apps like Duolingo to improve my pronunciation and boost my confidence because they help me develop my skills.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng chính xác. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi sai về thì và danh từ số nhiều.

예시: I usually discover new apps through recommendations from friends. Sometimes, I also check the top charts on the App Store or see advertisements on social media.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý tưởng một cách hiệu quả. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và dễ hiểu hơn.

예시: In the future, I would like to use more apps that help me improve my productivity, such as 10-minute writing apps or note-taking apps. I believe these tools will support me in my studies.

× Recently I have been using Facebook and Zalo quite a lot to keep in touch with my friends and my family.

✓ Recently, I have been using Facebook and Zalo quite a lot to keep in touch with my friends and my family.

The original sentence is missing a comma after 'Recently'. Adding the comma improves readability and follows standard punctuation rules.

× Some time I will use YouTube to watch movies.

✓ Sometimes I use YouTube to watch movies.

The phrase 'Some time' is incorrect here; it should be 'Sometimes' to indicate occasional action. Also, 'will use' is changed to 'use' to match the habitual action context.

× An alert knew things on them.

✓ I learn new things on them regularly.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'An alert knew things' does not make sense. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning using proper structure.

× To be honest I'm really into educational an entertainment apps are usually used learn language learning apps like Duolingo to improve my pronunciation and confidence because it have me to improve my skill.

✓ To be honest, I'm really into educational and entertainment apps, usually language learning apps like Duolingo, to improve my pronunciation and confidence because they help me improve my skills.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'an' should be 'and'; 'are usually used learn' is incorrect and rephrased; 'it have me' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and pronoun use; 'skill' should be plural 'skills'. The correction addresses these errors for clarity and correctness.

× because it have me to improve my skill.

✓ because they help me improve my skills.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to multiple apps; 'they' is appropriate. Also, 'have me to improve' is incorrect; 'help me improve' is the correct expression.

× Are usually discover new apps through recommendation from friends and sometimes I watch it on the top chart on the App Store an hour when they are training on social media.

✓ I usually discover new apps through recommendations from friends, and sometimes I see them on the top charts on the App Store or when they are trending on social media.

The original sentence has incorrect word order, missing subjects, and unclear phrases like 'an hour' and 'training'. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects grammar and vocabulary.

× recommendation from friends

✓ recommendations from friends

'Recommendation' should be plural 'recommendations' because it refers to multiple suggestions from friends.

× I watch it on the top chart on the App Store an hour when they are training on social media.

✓ I see them on the top charts on the App Store or when they are trending on social media.

The preposition 'on' is correct for 'top charts', but 'an hour' is incorrect and replaced with 'or'. 'Training' is incorrect; the correct word is 'trending'.

× In the future I would like to use more apps that have me to improve my productivity like 10 min itching or north taking FI.

✓ In the future, I would like to use more apps that help me improve my productivity, like 10-minute writing or note-taking apps.

'Have me to improve' is incorrect; 'help me improve' is correct. '10 min itching' and 'north taking FI' are likely misheard or misspelled phrases and corrected to '10-minute writing' and 'note-taking' respectively.

× Think you just have to. Help me improve my studies.

✓ I think they just have to help me improve my studies.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the fragments into a complete, coherent sentence.