App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response naming the app, then explain why you use it with specific details. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' or 'as' to connect ideas logically.

예시: Recently, I have been using the YouTube app because it offers a wide range of educational videos. For example, I watched a tutorial that helped me understand complex topics clearly. Moreover, many expert teachers provide free lessons on YouTube, which benefits students who cannot afford extra classes.

제안: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific examples. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'because' to make your answer logical and easy to follow.

예시: I am usually interested in apps that are easy to use and provide useful information. For example, I often use Google Maps because it helps me explore new places by showing detailed roads and landmarks.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use linking words like 'also' and 'because' to connect ideas. Mention specific methods you use to find apps, such as searching on Google or checking app store ratings.

예시: I usually find new apps by searching on Google because it shows many recently launched applications. Also, I explore the Play Store where apps are rated by users, so I can choose the best ones based on their ratings.

제안: Your answer is relevant but needs better grammar and clearer structure. Start with a direct statement about your preference, then explain why. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: In the future, I would like to use apps that contain artificial intelligence technology because they make tasks more convenient and easier. So, I prefer apps with AI features as they can help everyone without any difficulties.

× I said Lee was the YouTube app as it is very helpful for me.

✓ I said I use the YouTube app as it is very helpful for me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'was' instead of the present tense 'use' to describe a current habit. The verb should be in the present tense to match the context of recent app usage.

× I such a useful video on it and it provide me a clear cut knowledge about various things

✓ I saw such a useful video on it and it provides me clear-cut knowledge about various things.

The sentence misses the verb 'saw' and uses 'provide' instead of 'provides' which is needed for third person singular subject 'it'. Also, 'clear cut' should be hyphenated as 'clear-cut'.

× As it also provided tutor service free of cost from other expert teachers as they can get their money from YouTube for posting their videos and help poor children who cannot afford the fees of extra classes.

✓ It also provides tutor services free of cost from other expert teachers, as they can earn money from YouTube for posting their videos and help poor children who cannot afford the fees of extra classes.

The verb 'provided' should be in present tense 'provides' to match the ongoing service. 'Tutor service' should be plural 'tutor services' to indicate multiple services. 'Get their money' is better expressed as 'earn money'.

× The apps which are very convenient to use and provide a lot of knowledge and stand owner my thoughts and I usually prefer their taps.

✓ The apps which are very convenient to use, provide a lot of knowledge, and align with my thoughts, I usually prefer those apps.

'Stand owner my thoughts' is incorrect; it should be 'align with my thoughts'. 'Their taps' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'those apps'.

× For example, I use Google map, it is very convenient for me to explore new place as on that that I can see various things and roads which have do not have an inter.

✓ For example, I use Google Maps; it is very convenient for me to explore new places as I can see various things and roads which do not have an internet connection.

'Google map' should be 'Google Maps' (proper noun). 'New place' should be plural 'new places'. 'Have do not have an inter' is incorrect; corrected to 'do not have an internet connection'.

× I'm not sure she active person and I'm usually prefer to use Google and on a Google there are observer ties Minton of new launched app which will be very helpful for me as well as I explored apps on play stores and that there is a sequence wise rating of app which app is very good, people rated them more and I find.

✓ I'm not sure if I am an active person, but I usually prefer to use Google. On Google, there are observations and mentions of newly launched apps which are very helpful for me. I also explore apps on Play Store where there is a sequential rating of apps; the apps rated higher are usually better, and I find them useful.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct grammar. 'Observer ties Minton' is unclear and corrected to 'observations and mentions'. 'New launched app' corrected to 'newly launched apps'. 'Play stores' corrected to 'Play Store'. The sentence is split for better readability.

× No doubt future is uncertain and but I usually prefer to use apps which usually container artificial intelligence technology because it made everybody worked very convenient and easy to use.

✓ No doubt the future is uncertain, but I usually prefer to use apps which contain artificial intelligence technology because they make everyone's work very convenient and easy to use.

'Container' is incorrect; it should be 'contain'. 'Made everybody worked' is incorrect; corrected to 'make everyone's work'. The modal verb 'can' could be used but is not necessary here.

× So I usually prefer app which have AI feature so it can help everybody without facing any hurdle.

✓ So I usually prefer apps which have AI features so they can help everybody without facing any hurdles.

'App' should be plural 'apps' to match 'have'. 'AI feature' should be plural 'AI features'. 'It can help' changed to 'they can help' to agree with plural subject. 'Hurdle' should be plural 'hurdles'.