App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较自然且内容丰富，但句子结构稍显简单，且缺少适当的连接词使内容更连贯。建议在回答中使用更多连接词如“and”、“also”、“because”等，使表达更流畅。

예시: I have recently used TikTok a lot because it offers entertaining short videos that brighten my day. Additionally, I enjoy using a reading app to dive into romantic novels during my free time. Moreover, Google Maps was very helpful when I planned a recent trip.

제안: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰，但句子之间缺少连接词，导致表达略显断裂。建议使用连接词如“for example”、“also”、“in addition”等，使回答更连贯自然。

예시: I'm usually interested in several kinds of apps. For example, reading apps allow me to access a wide range of books, especially romantic ones. Also, music and video apps like Spotify and YouTube are my go-to for entertainment. In addition, productivity apps such as Todoist help me manage my tasks efficiently. Since I love traveling, apps like Google Maps are really useful for navigation and exploring new places.

제안: 回答内容具体且信息量大，但句子较为简单，缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议适当使用连接词如“for instance”、“also”、“therefore”等，增强逻辑性。

예시: I usually discover apps through various channels. For instance, friends often recommend ones they find useful or fun. I also check App Store categories like top charts or new releases. Additionally, online reviews and tech blogs provide detailed insights into an app's features and performance, which helps me decide if it's worth trying.

제안: 回答内容丰富且表达自然，但句子之间连接词使用不够，建议增加连接词如“for example”、“also”、“moreover”等，使表达更连贯。

예시: In the future, I'd like to use more apps related to virtual reality. For example, there might be apps that let me explore historical sites or far-off places in an immersive way. Also, an app that helps with creative writing by offering prompts and tools to enhance my stories would be great. Moreover, an advanced language learning app with interactive ways to practice speaking would be really useful for improving my language skills.

× Using Tiktok a lot lately, it's full of entertaining short videos that can really brighten my day.

✓ I've been using Tiktok a lot lately; it's full of entertaining short videos that can really brighten my day.

句子开头的“Using Tiktok a lot lately”缺少主语，应该使用现在完成进行时态“I've been using”来表达最近一直在使用的动作。

× Music and video apps like Spotify and YouTube are my go to.

✓ Music and video apps like Spotify and YouTube are my go-to.

“go to”作为形容词短语，表示“首选”，应写作连字符形式“go-to”。

× Google Maps came in handy when I was planning a trip.

✓ Google Maps came in handy while I was planning a trip.

“when”用于时间状语从句时，表达动作同时发生更合适用“while”，表示“在……期间”。

× I usually discover apps through various channels.

✓ I usually discover apps via various channels.

“through”强调穿过某物，表示“通过”时更正式和准确的表达是“via”，尤其是指信息渠道时。

× Friends often recommend ones they find useful or fun.

✓ Friends often recommend apps they find useful or fun.

“ones”指代不明确，应该明确指代“apps”，使句子更清晰。

× I also check App Store categories like top charts or new releases.

✓ I also check App Store categories such as top charts or new releases.

“like”用于举例时口语化，书面表达中用“such as”更正式准确。

× An app that helps with creative writing, offering prompts and tools to enhance my stories would also be great.

✓ An app that helps with creative writing by offering prompts and tools to enhance my stories would also be great.

缺少介词“by”来连接动名词短语，表示方式或手段。

× And an advanced language learning app with more interactive ways to practice speaking would be really useful for improving my language.

✓ And an advanced language learning app with more interactive ways of practicing speaking would be really useful for improving my language.

“ways to practice”应改为“ways of practicing”，更符合固定搭配，表达“练习说话的更多互动方式”。